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Egregious

Bad to the bone Incorigible Witches brew Potion of evil Naughty ~~\ De stro~~ yer Atomic bomb killer Mischief ***This is for the worst poem ever contest

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Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/28/2010 8:54:00 PM

lol, you didn't work hard enough, it reads pretty well:)

Mitch White

Date: 11/26/2010 10:49:00 PM

Ya it's bone bad- Congrats my friend

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2010 7:04:00 AM

Unfortunately Ron is not a romantic poetry lover but he is romantic kinda guy .. being put on his back for one day is bad but three days is tragedy in his world of constant activity... I wrote "With Baited Breath" while in the hospital.. my emotions were soaring Doris.. the thought of serious health issues is a little scary ... always it seems at holiday time. .. I lost my MOM last Thanksgiving Day and this brought all those memories back..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/23/2010 6:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in PD'S contest Doris. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/22/2010 6:22:00 AM

Number 2 in worst poem contest...LOL

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2010 2:12:00 PM

congratulations on this contest of worst poem. Also I call this easiest contest ever! hahaha I did my entry in like two minutes! Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2010 1:38:00 PM

Great one that won big..Congratulations..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/21/2010 12:37:00 PM

Congratulations on this well deserved win, Doris

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/21/2010 11:55:00 AM

Congrats Doris on your big win in P.D.'s contest for the worst poem ever.. bet nothing like this ever happened to u before luv.. so enjoy your top spot ..and Happy Thanksgiving luv..

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 11/21/2010 10:36:00 AM

Doris...congrats on big win.......... Luv/Best wishes.......Hitendra Mehta

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/21/2010 9:52:00 AM

congrats for a big win as one of the worst poets, doris!! much potential here... warmest, nette

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/21/2010 8:44:00 AM

This did make me laugh....so it has Value!!!

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/21/2010 8:33:00 AM

Doris, congratulations on your win.. Hope your Sunday will be a blessed one ;) Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2010 7:43:00 AM

Congratulations! Doris, for your entry ,, shame on you for not Adding the word (WORST) on your title,, bu fair is fair,, lol,, I think this is the worst poem I've seen my name in,,lol,, but that was the meaning of it right,, Enjoyed the outcome of this contest, have a wonderful day,..p.d.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/19/2010 10:26:00 AM

Good luck in the contest,...always Michael

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/17/2010 9:24:00 PM

I think i have some idea, of the word play however most times i write i thing the spirit of the poetry has somthing slightly different for everyone, so i will not comment at this time, however i am more than happy to be enlightened. many thanks.

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/17/2010 12:53:00 PM

enjoyed reading your work Doris hope you do well, however this poem is not the worst i have seen, it maybe to hard for some poets to write bad even.

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 11/17/2010 9:14:00 AM

great dramatic write, only a deep thinker will get the message of this magical theme of poetry. Doris Culverhouse is a genus. love, Lightening Ink.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2010 6:46:00 PM

An interesting form of poetry here. And that atomic bomb is is mischief times a hundred! So what made you think to do this one, Doris?

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/16/2010 6:34:00 PM

Very clever, Doris! You have a terrific sense of humor and I enjoy your witty writes. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/16/2010 3:58:00 PM

Awesome Doris.. luv the way u divided up the spelling of the words for emphasis.. great message here in your well presented and written lines luv.. be blessed this happy though very rainy day luv..