Notes About The Poem
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Poetic Form: Nursery Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 July 26
Image: Themed to the song of the; Wheels On The Bus

Eggy Edgy

Tune of: "Wheels On The Bus"

I am Humpty Dumpty, longtime pal
longtime pal longtime pal
I am Humpty Dumpty, longtime pal
longtime ago
I am Eggy Edgy cracking up
cracking up cracking up
I am Eggy Edgy cracking up
all cracked up 
I saw Humpty Dumpty, falling down 
falling down falling down
I saw Humpty Dumpty, falling down 
fall off a wall
Now that Humpty Dumpty looks like me 
look like me look like me 
Now that Humpty Dumpty looks like me 
all cracked up 
Now he's Halfy Deafy he can't hear good
he can't hear good he can't hear good
Now he's Halfy Deafy he can't hear good
till he's healed of wounds
Healed up Humpty Dumpty, looking good 
looking good looking good
Healed up Humpty Dumpty, looking good 
CHEERS the neighborhood
I am Eggy Edgy all alone
all alone all alone
I am Eggy Edgy all alone
off to Dumpty's home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Bartley Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 6:28 PM
This one so far is my favorite. Thanks for entering that contest.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 5:21 AM
My thanks, Benjamin, I tend to agree. Aloha William
Kendrick Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 1:53 PM
Creative lines in this winning contest entry. Congratulations to you. Way to go. Sara K
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 4:05 PM
Comforting words silently expressed while busy in San Jose with a beautiful coast with the fam. O spoke too soo
Goldsmith Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 1:07 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun write/story with a great ending.... Say Hi to Humpty Dumpty. Hooray!!! Have a blessed day/week.....................
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 1:44 PM
Another angelic visit that lifts the heart, thank you Paula. Aloha William
Jones Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 5:58 PM
Cute idea! Congratulations on your win!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 9:34 AM
Thanks, Karen. You're Heaven-sent. Aloha William
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