Jun-Jun Villanueva Poet Free verse

' Eggspect the Un-Eggspected '

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earnestly sitting with the crowd
cogitating acutely for the uncharted answers
delineating each word issued and registered from my brain neurons
leave no spaces and blanks
analyzed and canvased every facet and item I wrote
stood up with ample confidence with myself
walked along the path between files of people
passed my paper
expecting to get the perfect and highest score
then,kabloooom! an "egg" for the nth time



directions not followed
but then,answers were all correct

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Beata Agustin December 26, 2024 at 8:39 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A January 16, 2016 at 5:16 PM well done. awesome poem. SKAT

Charmane Bellen November 10, 2013 at 3:16 PM that happened to me also and its exasperating..but love your poem though, congrats for the win my dear //always-Mane

Poet Destroyer A November 22, 2012 at 4:51 PM Jun-Jun.... , enjoyed stopping by once again ;-)~ Hope you are having a joyous holiday. Take care ~PD

Carol Eastman August 1, 2012 at 4:30 PM Congratulations on the win.

Sara Kendrick June 21, 2012 at 4:17 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

David Williams June 19, 2012 at 1:52 AM Jun-Jun congrats on your super win....David

Joann Grisetti June 18, 2012 at 8:57 PM eggsactly right. I used to teach 13 yr olds and they could not follow directions. So eggsasperating.Congratulations.

Joyce Johnson June 18, 2012 at 3:32 PM Oh too bad. Correct answers should have done it for you. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Anne-Lise Andresen June 18, 2012 at 11:33 AM Thanks for your egg poem - YOU won a prize !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown June 18, 2012 at 11:19 AM Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Eggs" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A June 9, 2012 at 12:33 PM good luck in the contest..pd

Anne-Lise Andresen June 9, 2012 at 10:58 AM A lot of egg-poems today jun-jun, and I like yours to - well done. - Wish you luck in contest, hope for a win. - oxox love Anne-Lise

David Williams June 9, 2012 at 10:09 AM Jun-Jun the title just dragged me in there, well done, I like this..David

Ilene Bauer June 9, 2012 at 9:40 AM very creative and interesting! i enjoyed this!

Joseph May June 9, 2012 at 9:35 AM your title and your poem are quite creative..good luck in the contest.....Joseph

Sara Kendrick June 9, 2012 at 8:42 AM This one is very creative and unusual..Stuff of which good poetry is formed..Enjoyed so much..If for a contest, winner for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence was uplifting..Sara