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Eggs-Acting Revenge Part 1

Oh noo' It has happened again.! I thought we had escaped the continual scene: forever falling down, and ya know what people actually celebrate it..? and we'd thought we were safe here) a place where you had sympathetic support, ITS NO GOOD..! that's what it isn't..' at last here was a chance at last to get time to create our own poems, after being famous for all this time..' and we never had the chance of creating our own stuff..' at least when we were killed off out there it was only by the cretins..! now it has happened here, its a spiritual thing, sob.' boo-hoo, I saw the shadow though..! it was a pale one..and we felt a vindictive force, and then our whole new world shattered.' I wonder how would some like it? you have been being pushed about since 1643, whoever did it must be a cold hearted and lonely person..' I remember reading reading some lines somewhere about just such a writer, hmm..' and now I'm a ghost and its all down to someone..! Dumpty...that is who I am now..And down in the dumps BUT I AM MAD MAD MAD and determined..! I can get revenge, I shall snoop in on any soup mail & nasty remarks and so on; I can do that because I am a ghost now..! we had such a hard life early on at the abbey farm there was ole aunt Patricia she was strict always minding our p's & q's for us always saying we didn't do enough, then after Dad left us 'I was hard' but I never wanted to be lost and nasty like she was, oh she was a stickler for 'rules' pashaaaw...! never changed her life though did they...? hmmm, what to do next.? I don't know though if I really should go down that road, it would be a contradiction of all I have tried to live, by even through that nasty war, right up to now I suppose..' look! if I became like that I would probably be going around with a horrible hot anger inside me, it would be like a big heavy stone where my heart should be..! Oh you know what I mean.! and what would I do next.? after I track them down.. after, I DESTROY THEM UTTERLY))) what then old egg? I don't know what to do I feel as if I am being 'almost coerced ' here.. and I've heard about the other place..' its hot they say, with a big black iron round thing..' I don't think I would like it there, Oh if only Humpty and Dumpty could be here together again..'

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Date: 10/17/2015 8:28:00 PM
This one I really liked. I prefer not to go around with stone in my heart ) I wrote a poem called Dear God, there is a stone where my heart should,,,, and one called Contradictions . :)
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Date: 3/1/2014 10:57:00 PM
Sad, eager emotion Joe, very interesting write. J.A.B.
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Date: 3/1/2014 7:35:00 PM
hahaha. I am reading DAver's comment to you. Scared off by the ghost of that rotten egg, he said. I think he was as mystified as I!! well, let me see the part two! I think the title of your story is very clever.
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Date: 2/28/2014 9:35:00 AM
I hear all the king's horses and all the king's men are still trying. They are constantly being scared off though by the ghost of that rotten egg. Love, daver
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