EFFORTLESS

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EFFORTLESS* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ frilly white flower, windblown floating above the cedar oh my! how flowers journey their scattered color becomes wind. effortless to be a flower in the wind to let Nature pull one home, always home. *Note: Poem originally written for and submitted in response to Creative Ramblings weekly prompt.(creativeramblings.com/writing-prompts/weekly-prompt-week-16/). This is my original poem.

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Rowena Velasco

Date: 8/9/2025 1:44:00 AM

This poem feels so light and peaceful—like a breath of fresh air. I love how you capture the effortless beauty of a flower carried by the wind, perfectly blending nature’s grace with a sense of coming home. The simplicity makes it really calming and lovely to read.

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/8/2025 10:51:00 AM

For sure; lift with the flow, nature has us in her arms. Great visual. Lovely write!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/8/2025 5:01:00 PM

aww, thank you, Joe, for your uplifting comments. You made my day...have a pleasant weekend, Sara