Efficacious Ii - For Adult Contest

EFFICACIOUS ii - (“FOR ADULT CONTEST”) Despite how difficult it is everyone has to grow up. Embracing the world with or without an agenda, Adulthood is such a SWOT analysis. Strengthen to progress… Weaken in the process… Opportunity is a knock away. Treat yourself with positive thinking. Step forward with your bat. Strike and maybe it will leave the ballpark. If you strike out, do not fret. Life as an adult has its disappointments. Next step is coming up fast. Hang tough so that you will be who laugh last. Your strides diversify. This is the true meaning of being an adult. You are your own self-worth. [End of Poem] Philosophical Tenet: We are our own creation! ___________________________________ Penned April 21, 2015!
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Lamoureux Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 7:27 AM
I like the feeling of determination within these words.
Walker  Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 1:25 PM
Thanks Richard. May I pay you a visit? Smile... Verlena
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 7:16 AM
thickened with wisdom and powerful!!!..olive eloisa :)!
Walker  Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 7:53 AM
Thanks Olive... Verlena
Nunez Avatar
April 23, 2015 at 7:59 AM
As adult as they come... go out, do your part and take charge. A very strong character of an adult here. Loved it Verlena. A 7 Blessings for the contest. :)
Walker  Avatar
April 23, 2015 at 8:22 AM
Thanks Kim... Verlena
May Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 10:59 PM
Very good advice ...good luck in the contest
Walker  Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 12:50 AM
Thanks Joseph! Verlena
Konos Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 4:48 PM
I enjoyed this because it brought back memories...that still linger..."I never did know what I wanted to be when I grew up!" My brother wanted to drive a garbage truck but me hmmmm, I'm still thinking about it...Thanks Again
Walker  Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 4:55 PM
Thanks Judy for you super-awesome response. Verlena
Allison Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 4:43 PM
Wise words indeed Verlena - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Walker  Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 4:44 PM
Thanks Jan for your awesome response and support of my poem in the contest... Verlena
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