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Effervescent Glow

The moon's effervescent glow hangs low as if saddened while the heavens shower me with tears of its once bright celestial being soaking me in the hurt and sadness, feeling the moons pull upon me I ask "How can you cry and still shine with such beauty ?" clouds part and all the celestial beings seem to smile down upon me Warming my heart telling me "No one is above pain and one should not stay in a state of distress! For no matter how great your pain, happiness is something one must find within themself.. We can not allow our emotion to define us by not seeing it as a healing process realizing with good comes bad Learning from it but never letting it take our effervescent glow....

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Dean Wood

Date: 10/29/2019 8:28:00 AM

This is a beautiful write Brenda. It evokes deep feelings and rings of truth. Very nicely done!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/29/2019 9:36:00 AM

Dean thank you so very much ! I do appreciate your visit!;)

John Fleming

Date: 10/23/2019 9:57:00 AM

I like the theme you have chosen here, Brenda. A favourite one of mine, a tried and tested one of course that has stood the test of time...but...you do it great justice...and whats more -- ever so wonderfully! Beautifully crafted - Enjoyed! :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/23/2019 11:06:00 PM

John you make me blush!;) lol you are so appropriated you know that right!;) all my affection!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/11/2019 2:46:00 PM

Such wisdom imparted in this poetic piece. Rarely have I seen such a romantic write dispense such sage, commonsense advice: We do, indeed, have to take the bad with the good, 'cos as you penned it, it's all part of a 'healing process.' Bravo, Brenda the Romantic Philosopher! ~ gw

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/14/2019 4:23:00 PM

Thank you Gershon I so appreciate your words!;)

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/10/2019 3:49:00 PM

My sissy is glowing with effervescence...deep verse Bren...Dragon Fire is ready to spew...I've started a prayer vigil...Prayers for Lia...more info at the latest potd or my latest post...^WW^ :o)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/10/2019 3:54:00 PM

Thank you bro bro I have gone and seen it and let him know my prayers are with them!;)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/10/2019 2:58:00 PM

Loved the realism and the practicality in the counsel, well done Brenda words to live by. Effervescent glow...nice!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/10/2019 3:44:00 PM

John thank you so much! Your comments are always welcomed and appreciated!;)

Ts Poetry

Date: 10/10/2019 2:07:00 PM

happiness awaits on the horizon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/10/2019 3:42:00 PM

Yes but when will the horizon appear? Lol thx T!;)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/10/2019 12:57:00 PM

Hello Brenda Chiri, you know what i am doing with your poem? It will become my favourite. That is how much i like this poem. So have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/14/2019 3:11:00 PM

Your welcome Brenda. Have a nice day my friend.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/10/2019 3:41:00 PM

Ah Darlene thank you so very much! I so appreciate your words and the fav!;)