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Effervescence

Mysterious wan
Amidst green ripples ahead.
Beneath Heavens glow

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Mitch White

March 30, 2010 at 1:49 PM

Nice Haiku Congrats Cecil- can you let me know what `wan` means

John Freeman

March 30, 2010 at 8:17 AM

Brilliant entry, Cecil. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 29, 2010 at 7:32 PM

Congrats on your win. nicely written

Doris Culverhouse

March 29, 2010 at 3:43 PM

congrats on the win!! Good write!

March 28, 2010 at 1:14 PM

Cecil, I liked the uplifting view in this poem the first time I read it. Congratulations being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen

Marty Owens

March 28, 2010 at 10:39 AM

Beautiful Haiku...congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty

James Fraser

March 28, 2010 at 8:39 AM

Cecil, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest, with this terrific Haiku >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 28, 2010 at 7:04 AM

Congrats Cecil on your winning poem and placement in the Champagne Skies contest.. a wonderful Haiku and luv your title too and well deserved win ..so enjoy your trip to the winners circle..see u there..luv.. "Sweetheart"