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Effervescence

Mysterious wan Amidst green ripples ahead. Beneath Heavens glow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/30/2010 1:49:00 PM
Nice Haiku Congrats Cecil- can you let me know what `wan` means
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Date: 3/30/2010 8:17:00 AM
Brilliant entry, Cecil. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/29/2010 7:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win. nicely written
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Date: 3/29/2010 3:43:00 PM
congrats on the win!! Good write!
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Date: 3/28/2010 1:14:00 PM
Cecil, I liked the uplifting view in this poem the first time I read it. Congratulations being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen
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Date: 3/28/2010 10:39:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku...congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty
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Date: 3/28/2010 8:39:00 AM
Cecil, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest, with this terrific Haiku >> James
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Date: 3/28/2010 7:04:00 AM
Congrats Cecil on your winning poem and placement in the Champagne Skies contest.. a wonderful Haiku and luv your title too and well deserved win ..so enjoy your trip to the winners circle..see u there..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/28/2010 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Cecil. Love Carol
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Date: 3/28/2010 1:05:00 AM
Cecil, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 3/27/2010 8:10:00 AM
Nice use of imagery for an uplifting view. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Good luck in the contest. Have a good weekend. Karen
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Date: 3/25/2010 6:47:00 PM
Cecil~ Very nice haiku good luck in the contest! Laura :)
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Date: 3/25/2010 6:07:00 PM
nice hope you do well
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Date: 3/25/2010 5:30:00 PM
Great Haiku...If for the contest should do well..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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