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Effects of Words

Written: October 05, 2023 
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Words are just darts thrown toward meaning.
In a linguistic dance, they find their gleaming
With every utterance, their aim takes flight.
Seeking understanding, conquering the night

But with atrocity on their hands, they agreed,
Words have the power to induce hearts to bleed.
Each syllable is a weapon, sharp and true.
Words can build bridges or tear them in two.

In this world of language, where battles are fought,
Words hold the key to the lessons we're taught.
They can heal wounds or inflict eminent pain.
They can inspire love or drive us insane.

Yet, words are just darts thrown toward meaning.
Often missing their mark, often careening.
Can be twisted, misunderstood, lost in translation,
Landing in hearts with a different vibration.

But still, we wield them, hoping to convey
The depths of our thoughts, the emotions at play
We string them together, akin to pearls on a thread.
Crafting stories, poems, and songs to be said

Words are our canvas, our palette, our brush,
Painting pictures of joy, sorrow, and hush.
They can capture a moment, freeze it in time,
Or transport us to places, worlds so sublime.

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Ink Empress December 12, 2023 at 6:18 AM Words and the significance so well depicted and delivered here dr sotto. I absolutely love the depth of every line in this and how powerful what you’ve conveyed here is, especially love “ In this world of language, where battles are fought, Words hold the key to the lessons we're taught. They can heal wounds or inflict eminent pain.” Couldnt have said it any better , impeccable!! Congratulations on your win. Pleasure reading always your work

Miranda Hawley October 7, 2023 at 10:22 PM Wowzers is the best word I have for this poem about words! Everything you said is straight up facts. We have all, I assume all of us, have had healing words and have used DESTRUCT-O words. Bandaids or knives.

Valsa George October 6, 2023 at 10:22 PM Each stanza is so very meaningful ! You have placed the words with the skill of someone arranging the jigsaw puzzle! If one word is misplaced, the beauty and decor you have built up will be lost. I cannot pick up a single stanza as my favorite. So Faving the whole poem. Yet I cannot but quote these lines bearing invaluable truths! ".... words are just darts thrown toward meaning. Often missing their mark, often careening. Can be twisted, misunderstood, lost in translation, Landing in hearts with a different vibration." Then of course the last stanza.

Victor Buhagiar October 6, 2023 at 9:12 AM What can one expect from a great poet? You have composed a lesson for us to search for the right word. And in so doing you use similes and emotions. We write as if we're painting a scene worthy of note. Stunning and sublime. Blessings.

Bill Baker October 6, 2023 at 6:53 AM A beautiful description of the life of a poet, Lasaad. It resonates with my poet's soul. Your poetry is so complete that it is hard to put into words that do it justice. Another poem to add to my FAVs list, my dear friend. Adding the sound makes it a very enjoyable experience. I also enjoy the colorful picture as an introduction to your creative and colorful descriptions. May your heart be peaceful and strong, Bill

Vijay Pandit October 6, 2023 at 4:41 AM Words are our canvas, our palette, our brush, Painting pictures of joy, sorrow---, They can capture a moment, freeze it in time, Or transport us to places, worlds so sublime--so deep and meaningful, my friend. A FAVE!

Besma Riabi Dziri October 6, 2023 at 12:51 AM So stunning is your power to match the appropriate meaning to the suitable word! A wordsmith with a genuine gift of forging unique masterpieces of creative writing that holds between its layers and dimensions insightful thoughts and powerful feelings.. Dear Lasaad, I'm so amazed by your captivating, profound and breathtaking poetry.. An immense delight to read.. God bless you. My deepest regards.

Paige Hind October 5, 2023 at 5:32 PM Very powerful. I don't know how you come up with so any themes and rhymes. So gifted are you!

Deb M October 5, 2023 at 2:20 PM Words hold so much power and can do much good and so much harm! Excellent poem Lasaad! Debx

Paula Goldsmith October 5, 2023 at 2:17 PM A wonderful/powerful write/pretty picture. Have a blessed day.............

Anne-Lise Andresen October 5, 2023 at 1:00 PM Yes, words have power ... and words are magic ... words bring people together ... without words I would never have known you, Las :) - Your pearls on the thread are always shiny and beautiful to read :) - hugs

Silent One October 5, 2023 at 12:56 PM Your poem flows and rhymes so well.. in each line you make valid points and in a wonderful poetic manner... Words are our canvas, our palette, our brush... so true. Amazing poem.

Sam Scott October 5, 2023 at 11:35 AM I really do love this!!! Wonderful imagery too and sewn with truth so deep it almost hurts. Definitely a favourite - stand by for the accolades, Sotto, you deserve them my friend. Great piece :)