Eerie Forest

Swaying branches spy as secret spooks in canopy’s dungeon
Creepers knitted around trunks like ornamented bead chains 
Suspended pillar roots appear as the matted hair of Lord Shiva.
Hoarse noises as non-rhythmic beats of an amateur drummer
Serpents dragging their bodies on dried leaves with cracklings
Hoots, chirps, clicks, and whoops from the crowns of trees
Whispers of exhausted leaves and goggling eyes of silent owls
Spiders’ silky webs  levitating as the canvas of boats
Trunks green with mass, standing as Lucifer's lieutenants
Scent of flora mixed with acrid smell and the floor with sticky clag 
An impassable stretch never been eyed by the sun and moon as well.

PLACE: 3rd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Nicholsen Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 10:06 PM
Awesome write enjoyed reading your work here
Venkata Ramana Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 7:16 AM
Thank you so much for your compliments.
La France Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 6:51 AM
Patri, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest, lovely poem, Constance
Venkata Ramana Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 9:43 AM
Thank you so much for your compliments
Greenhough Avatar
September 24, 2024 at 8:06 PM
This is a good description of an eerie forest. Though scary to most people, this is the type of forest I love best. I have been happily lost in such a place. Thank you for this journey in nature.
Venkata Ramana Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 9:51 AM
Thank you so much for your compliments.
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