Eerie Conditions

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Eerie feel 'pon the air Cloudy conditions reign Something is going to happen Different not the same Because clouds misshapen Eerie feel 'pon the air Where will it go from here Is it a symbol of times? Danger on every front Life no longer worth a dime Eerie feel 'pon the air One time man had a purpose He made in God's image Had a desire to please Love God, felt call to worship Eerie feel 'pon the air All news casts tragedy Fear descending 'pon man But someday soon the end Peace and love God's game plan

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Joe Maverick

Date: 4/26/2022 1:49:00 PM

Bring it on David.. ' And I am not saying this In a flippant way.' One member of my family Would say..Send it down David in the case Of heavy rain ( there was a sense of acceptance ) as this was uttered of belonging Almost.' Seeing your wording Sara, in memory Of a decent person I commented so, but we Do need God's rule now, so very much'

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/27/2022 5:15:00 AM

Thank you, Joe for the understanding review. We do need God back in reign on this earth. So much negative is happening. I do see on the news casts that good is happening also, but I think that evil is much more common. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 4/14/2022 12:47:00 PM

That's what we feel! the last three lines captures the core of that eerie feeling! relatable to many things, especially war at this moment! Nicely written! - Marshall

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/15/2022 4:15:00 PM

Thank you, Marshall for stopping by. Yes, we look forward to God's game plan. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/14/2022 10:47:00 AM

We had frightening floods in KZN Durban - highways sunk into deep sinkholes, - houses collapsed as mudslides took houses and slid down the hill taking whole families with them, car factories all along the south coast, lost thousands of new cars that just floated out as rivers broke their banks, - cost of lives lost last night confirmed at 45 but hundreds missing. this is happening world wide with climate change. God created a perfect planet but humankind has rubbished it, Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/15/2022 4:14:00 PM

Jennifer, I am so sorry to learn of the terrible happening in your area. I had not heard about it because the news is mostly about the war right now. I looked it up on the internet and it is terrible for such destruction to happen. I am glad that you are safe and are able to be on here with us. There have been some powerful storms here as well. This last one split and part of it went above us and part below us. There were some bad storms out of it, but we were missed. I have to give the thanks to God in His mercy. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/14/2022 2:45:00 AM

Nice Monchielle, Sara:) truer words were never spoken...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/15/2022 4:08:00 PM

Why, thank you, Jo. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/13/2022 6:32:00 PM

Bring on the peace and love now, I say! ~ Knot Soon Enuf

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/15/2022 2:22:00 PM

Gershon, Thanks for the visit to my page. Yes, peace is what we all want except for a few leaders. Sara