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Eerie Conditions

Eerie feel 'pon the air
Cloudy conditions reign
Something is going to happen
Different not the same
Because clouds misshapen

Eerie feel 'pon the air
Where will it go from here
Is it a symbol of times?
Danger on every front
Life no longer worth a dime 

Eerie feel 'pon the air
One time man had a purpose
He made in God's image
Had a desire to please
Love God, felt call to worship

Eerie feel 'pon the air
All news casts tragedy
Fear descending 'pon man
But someday soon the end
Peace and love God's game plan

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Joe Maverick

April 26, 2022 at 1:49 PM

Bring it on David.. ' And I am not saying this In a flippant way.' One member of my family Would say..Send it down David in the case Of heavy rain ( there was a sense of acceptance ) as this was uttered of belonging Almost.' Seeing your wording Sara, in memory Of a decent person I commented so, but we Do need God's rule now, so very much'

Sara Kendrick

April 27, 2022 at 5:15 AM

Thank you, Joe for the understanding review. We do need God back in reign on this earth. So much negative is happening. I do see on the news casts that good is happening also, but I think that evil is much more common. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

April 14, 2022 at 12:47 PM

That's what we feel! the last three lines captures the core of that eerie feeling! relatable to many things, especially war at this moment! Nicely written! - Marshall

Sara Kendrick

April 15, 2022 at 4:15 PM

Thank you, Marshall for stopping by. Yes, we look forward to God's game plan. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

April 14, 2022 at 10:47 AM

We had frightening floods in KZN Durban - highways sunk into deep sinkholes, - houses collapsed as mudslides took houses and slid down the hill taking whole families with them, car factories all along the south coast, lost thousands of new cars that just floated out as rivers broke their banks, - cost of lives lost last night confirmed at 45 but hundreds missing. this is happening world wide with climate change. God created a perfect planet but humankind has rubbished it, Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick

April 15, 2022 at 4:14 PM

Jennifer, I am so sorry to learn of the terrible happening in your area. I had not heard about it because the news is mostly about the war right now. I looked it up on the internet and it is terrible for such destruction to happen. I am glad that you are safe and are able to be on here with us. There have been some powerful storms here as well. This last one split and part of it went above us and part below us. There were some bad storms out of it, but we were missed. I have to give the thanks to God in His mercy. I appreciate the visit. Sara