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November.17.2023

Lanterne, Old or New Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Joseph May

eel

eel
slimy
well streamlined
lives in water
fish

fishwaterlanterne

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Bj Legros Kelley

November 21, 2023 at 5:50 PM

Congratulations on your win with your amazing write, very descriptive work Valsa!

Sara Kendrick

November 20, 2023 at 8:31 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Very creative and unique one. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 20, 2023 at 2:16 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful Lanterne in Joseph May's contest, Valsa :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

November 19, 2023 at 7:58 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Eel" again. Have a blessed day/week......................

Joseph P. DiMino

November 18, 2023 at 12:26 PM

When I was young, I would fish for eels in the bay often. Flowered and fried~ very tasty. Not easy to get a grip on them once in the boat.

Ink Empress

November 18, 2023 at 2:28 AM

Back to congratulate you on your well deserved win. I loved reading this dear valsa. Sending you light always

Joseph May

November 17, 2023 at 7:27 PM

Congrats on your win Valsa, Very nicely done

Paula Goldsmith

November 17, 2023 at 12:12 PM

Your "Eel" is a creative write. It was fun to read. Good Luck.... I also did is one. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away............

Sotto Poet

November 17, 2023 at 11:55 AM

Valsa, you have executed this form with remarkable finesse! The imagery depicted within is truly exceptional! May fortune favor you and here's to a delightful Friday!

Mike Gentile

November 17, 2023 at 11:20 AM

Valsa, though the thought of the subject matter royally creeps me out ( LOL), I have to say that you did a fantastic job with this form! Terrific imagery! Good luck and Happy Friday!!

Ink Empress

November 17, 2023 at 9:15 AM

Oh this is very well described about eels. I always get a bit weird when i see them while snorkeling. You’ve explained what is an eel here so effortlessly. In few syllables. Insightful take, goodluck for the contest

eel

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