Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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some nights I pause
and actually believe
it would be easy

to rewind the film
to rewrite my day
maybe even my life

while some might toss
the old one aside
and try a new script

I'd prefer to
take my scissors
and make edits

and mostly what I'd do
is stretch the time
I spent with you



AP: 2nd place 2021, Honorable Mention 2026, Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on June 11, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (JUN 12) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

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Terry Flood June 13, 2021 at 11:18 AM Nice write, Line. I guess if we could rewind our lives, then nobody would have seen Jaws 4 ;-) Congrats on your win. Terry Line Gauthier June 13, 2021 at 5:46 PM LOL~

Gary Radice June 13, 2021 at 3:33 AM Brilliant! Line Gauthier June 13, 2021 at 9:27 AM Thank you so much, Gary. If I figure out how, I'll let you know ~

Jan Allison June 11, 2021 at 2:14 PM aww if only we could turn back time like this, a heartfelt poem sweet Line:-) hugs jan xx Line Gauthier June 11, 2021 at 8:35 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jan~

Heidi Sands June 11, 2021 at 1:57 PM A sweet poem Line. Very nice :) Line Gauthier June 11, 2021 at 8:34 PM Thanks, Heidi ~