Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Edge of Wonder

At the edge of wonder where the tall grass lie
drifts scents of ambrosia caressing my eye
lands full of promise our futures now stay
bestowed to us under a spring hued violet day

Undressed in flowing waters clear as a crystal ball
revealing almost everything but really nothing at all
two young souls grasping at strawberry skies
savoring the sugar rush as time floats on by

Exotic breezes blow lost in a fervent embrace 
entwined hands and heartbeats held in place
capturing memories filled with endless possibility
creating fresh footprints heading toward civility

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Arthur Vaso May 6, 2017 at 9:30 PM This poem is so good, is being stolen and plagiarized! Arthur Vaso May 6, 2017 at 9:53 PM Not me, might be Connie LOL Tim Smith May 6, 2017 at 9:37 PM Checking out suspects.. you're on the list...lol

John Hamilton January 13, 2017 at 12:27 PM Just beautiful rhymes Tim, soo good!A7

Aarushi Pandey January 13, 2017 at 10:46 AM Wow! Back here after a long time. The best thing is, OPENING THE WORKS OF POETS YOU FOLLOW and reading their poems over a Mug of coffee. This is so melodious, so beautiful. A perfect poem of this perfect day x

Nette Onclaud January 13, 2017 at 9:52 AM such a calming melody, tim, sigh!.. huggs

Casarah Nance January 13, 2017 at 9:12 AM what a moment, very vivid ;)

Arthur Vaso January 13, 2017 at 1:26 AM Beautiful yet again Tim, great write!

Sunita U.D Palawon January 12, 2017 at 10:24 PM Read the comments below. Share the same thoughts. A 7 for you! :)

Charmaine Chircop January 12, 2017 at 8:32 PM Grasping at strawberry skies savouring the sugar rush-What a fantastic expression.Drifts scents of ambrosia caressing my eye-another exceptional line.How romantic this is Tim.Absolutely beautiful.A fave.

White Wolf January 12, 2017 at 4:58 PM A wonderful poem, Tim. I really enjoyed this one /|\

Heidi Sands January 12, 2017 at 3:46 PM Very nice, pulls the reader right in as it flows along! :)

Chris Green January 12, 2017 at 3:45 PM Enchanting Tim, loved the strawberry skies line, this has love's smile written all over it.