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Edge of Summers Crease

Sunshine drops a morning wink A soft warm breeze I sit and think Across the lake the mallards wait In southern skies a journeys date The oaks are hung in painted gold Where pretty words of praise are told Sounds of life along nature's path Wonders filled her righteous bath With guide of visions beauty blessed Through eyes of blue my soul's caressed I stroll near edges of summers crease The bluebirds sing and I'm at peace

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Carole Duet

Date: 5/16/2017 1:48:00 PM

Lovely imagery in this poem, Tim. I love Autumn. Congrats on your win too!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2017 6:06:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Curtis Johnson

Date: 5/12/2017 9:39:00 AM

Congrats Tim. Great work.

Darren White

Date: 5/12/2017 3:52:00 AM

Hey my friend, congretulations!!!!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/11/2017 9:53:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem and glad to see its a 1st! Can I spot winners or what? :)

Eve Roper

Date: 5/11/2017 6:00:00 PM

Big congratulations on your win, Tim. Nature brings out very tranquil feelings....

Skat A

Date: 5/11/2017 2:42:00 PM

Dear Tim, WOW, it wasn't so much your writing skills that earned you the top spot. I was lost/yet felt every moment, you pinned on this delightful WAKE. I love when I find myself absorbing the sun, with my eyes close. have yourself and awesome day. Congratulations :) SKAT

Tim Smith
Date: 5/11/2017 2:48:00 PM

Thanks Skatarina ...great to see you here : ))

Carol B.

Date: 9/16/2016 5:13:00 PM

Brings a smile to face. Saving this in my favs.

Daver Austin

Date: 9/15/2016 2:59:00 PM

This keeps summer in the heart and mind. Enjoyed so much. Love, daver

Supraja Kannan

Date: 9/14/2016 6:17:00 AM

Great imagery... Beautifully written....

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/14/2016 4:04:00 AM

Such a beautiful poem. Great imagery. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks fro sharing it.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/14/2016 12:19:00 AM

Came to read this again, only to say, when we bring hope we bring new days!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/13/2016 7:50:00 PM

You bring light to the darkness!

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/13/2016 12:42:00 PM

Beautiful poem of nature and it's tranquility. Those early morning moments of solace always prepare me for whatever may come my way that day. Sounds wonderful Tim. Enjoyed the peaceful read:)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/13/2016 12:24:00 PM

Such a beautiful gentle poem and the imagery is so lovely:-) hugs Jan xx