Premiere Contest WinnerEdge of Summers Crease

Sunshine drops a morning wink
A soft warm breeze I sit and think
Across the lake the mallards wait
In southern skies a journeys date

The oaks are hung in painted gold
Where pretty words of praise are told
Sounds of life along nature's path
Wonders filled her righteous bath

With guide of visions beauty blessed
Through eyes of blue my soul's caressed
I stroll near edges of summers crease
The bluebirds sing and I'm at peace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Duet Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 1:48 PM
Lovely imagery in this poem, Tim. I love Autumn. Congrats on your win too!
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 6:06 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Johnson Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 9:39 AM
Congrats Tim. Great work.
White Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 3:52 AM
Hey my friend, congretulations!!!!
Vaso Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 9:53 PM
This is a beautiful poem and glad to see its a 1st! Can I spot winners or what? :)
Roper Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 6:00 PM
Big congratulations on your win, Tim. Nature brings out very tranquil feelings....
A  Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 2:42 PM
Dear Tim, WOW, it wasn't so much your writing skills that earned you the top spot. I was lost/yet felt every moment, you pinned on this delightful WAKE. I love when I find myself absorbing the sun, with my eyes close. have yourself and awesome day. Congratulations :) SKAT
Smith Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 2:48 PM
Thanks Skatarina ...great to see you here : ))
B. Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Brings a smile to face. Saving this in my favs.
Austin Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 2:59 PM
This keeps summer in the heart and mind. Enjoyed so much. Love, daver
Kannan Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 6:17 AM
Great imagery... Beautifully written....
Sathasivam Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 4:04 AM
Such a beautiful poem. Great imagery. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks fro sharing it.
Vaso Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 12:19 AM
Came to read this again, only to say, when we bring hope we bring new days!
Vaso Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 7:50 PM
You bring light to the darkness!
Turner Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 12:42 PM
Beautiful poem of nature and it's tranquility. Those early morning moments of solace always prepare me for whatever may come my way that day. Sounds wonderful Tim. Enjoyed the peaceful read:)
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 12:24 PM
Such a beautiful gentle poem and the imagery is so lovely:-) hugs Jan xx
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