Edge of Night

At the edge of night, the sky thins to ink,
day’s last breath bruised violet and blue.
Shadows stretch their silver spines,
slow animals learning the dark.

The sun slips away like a secret kept,
leaving embers tangled in cloud.
Windows wake with whispered light,
while streets swallow their own names.

Time loosens its tight brass buttons,
and thought drifts, moth-soft, toward meaning.
At this border between belief and sleep,
the world exhales—
and even fear feels briefly feathered.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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George Avatar
February 21, 2026 at 5:07 AM
Your imagery is arresting and different from what ordinary poets can think.
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2026 at 1:40 PM
Excellent work, Jay
Roper Avatar
February 19, 2026 at 3:32 PM
your imagery and feelings in your verse, "Edge of Night" are amazing. I really enjoyed reading. Good luck in the contest.
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