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Edge of Despair

When life becomes confusing, my only saviour is my simple musing. Twilight shimmers in orange, red clouds float above, preparing for blood rain. Lost to ponder, I contemplate and wonder why the symphonic sky showcases shadows of ghosts as a susurration of sighs, reflect sands of time, like an unbalanced hourglass. As words lose innocent connotations I find no use for speech. I drift into my silent reverie - but release through poetry. Wild fires no longer rage, rain perishes like a drought, but the smell of ash remains who knows what winds may come and go and what they will bring and take. Motionless mind agrees to a ceasefire, with my apprehensive heart. Cumulonimbus clouds clear, sky is like a fresh sapphire page. Simple sun shines - scintillating, illuminating an enchanting rainbow. Horizons reflect like stained glass windows. Path clears before me, as I bask in the brisk breeze. Refreshing wise winds soothe, as zephyrs heal tender wounds. I see smoky mountains up ahead, but I believe I can conquer them as pain is no longer my companion.

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Date: 2/12/2024 9:25:00 PM
Very well expressed enjoyed reading your work
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Date: 2/3/2024 10:45:00 AM
I do believe that writing is a great help for many of us. It helps to put thoughts and feelings into words and that others get to read what we've written. For any pain you feel, I am sorry. I have much of my own, but focus now on what is important to me and do what I need to do.
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Date: 2/1/2024 10:04:00 PM
I love the way you end with hope and the use of alliteration in your poetry. My heart is joyful that your pain has passed and your optimism in believing you can conquer the metaphorical smoke that will come. Blessings my friends, and peace be with you. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 2/1/2024 10:37:00 AM
Musing is my saviour too, a wonderful write Silent One. “Twilight shimmers in orange, red clouds float above” that was the sky this evening at sunset, glorious and uplifting it was … Beryl
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Date: 2/1/2024 9:32:00 AM
Such deep emotions are portrayed in your brilliant style. But then you are a master poet.
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Date: 2/1/2024 8:48:00 AM
Solitude and deep breaths of silence are what is offered to the souls that seek tranquility from nature
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Date: 2/1/2024 7:47:00 AM
Your mastery in evoking vivid imagery has successfully enraptured and awestruck readers. Numerous lines have left an indelible impression on me, and the poem's seamless flow is commendable. I firmly believe this piece is exceptional. The profound expression of melancholy within these verses is nothing short of breathtaking, while the imagery you have skillfully crafted possesses an unparalleled poetic magnificence.
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Date: 2/1/2024 2:51:00 AM
Sometimes our muse can sooth our emotions to a calm like your poem has a soothing effect. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 2/1/2024 1:39:00 AM
Oh my, such an evocative and profound write this is! So beautifully you've conveyed emotions that dwell in hazy thoughts when our paths become unclear.. The melancholy is so breathtakingly expressed in these lines and the imagery that you've painted is poetically magnificent! "Twilight shimmers in orange,red clouds float above,preparing for blood rain","Wild fires no longer rage,rain perishes like a drought,but the smell of ash remains" The after-effects of angst & suffering remain in the heart
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Date: 2/1/2024 1:45:00 AM
So wonderfully you've expressed in the ending too, that difficulties still await in the future but how the resilience inside one's soul has grown and it's full of courage to overcome any challenge.. Loved reading this absolutely..
Date: 1/31/2024 11:10:00 PM
Ah silent one, what a deeply moving and poignant write this is. I absolutely love the way you’ve expressed here using poetic techniques such as alliterations and brilliant diction that truly stands out and hits strong. I think so many would resonate with some parts of this poem , as i can relate to many lines, and i cant help but feel the melancholy and emotions that flow so seamlessly throughout this poem. I especially love the lines “ I drift into my silent reverie - release through poetry.“
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Date: 1/31/2024 11:11:00 PM
Amidst all that one might have been through. The strength and willpower to see beyond the darkness is depicted in such eloquence here in those last lines. I felt “ see smoky mountains up ahead, but I believe I can conquer them as pain is no longer my companion” powerful ending really loved this one!
Date: 1/31/2024 10:48:00 PM
Beautiful and the ending is optimistic of despairing!
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Date: 1/31/2024 7:22:00 PM
"When life becomes confusing, my only saviour is my simple musing." Powerful words my friend. I am adding this to my favorite list. Have a wonderful day Silent One.
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Date: 1/31/2024 6:56:00 PM
Pain, O that familiar face. But heart's wildfire flower, you set as enchanting rainbow in a page.
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Date: 1/31/2024 3:26:00 PM
I can relate... "When life becomes confusing, my only saviour is my simple musing." You've described how effective 'musing' is for the soul. I love when I write and the air clears around me...and when the despair of the day is no longer my companion. Such a powerful poem, Silent One. Have a wonderful evening, Sara
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Date: 1/31/2024 2:30:00 PM
Lost to ponder, I contemplate and wonder why the symphonic sky showcases shadows of ghosts--edge of despair is what I hear in these lines-- that seem to rule life, my friend--but only till the poem takes a positive turn, when--the ending conquers smoky mountains and pain is no longer a companion. Excellent bookends to your poem.
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Date: 1/31/2024 2:09:00 PM
I am sorry you feel the "edge of despair"- very powerful. "rain is a drought"- heavy and deep.
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Date: 1/31/2024 12:56:00 PM
Edge of Despair written and portrayed perfectly! I really felt this one Mr S! Debx
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Date: 1/31/2024 12:26:00 PM
wow one of my favorites from you S, beautiful, no words can describe this one, :)
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Date: 1/31/2024 11:36:00 AM
susurration of sighs… unbalanced hourglass… Motionless mind agrees to a ceasefire… Horizons reflect like stained glass windows… Refreshing wise winds soothe, as zephyrs heal tender wounds…Great!
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