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Edge

More afraid and fearless than I have ever been precariously perched upon the cusp of a dream faith and swollen heart clenched in either hand with an eye on the tide building castles in the sand. circa 2006

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Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/13/2019 9:39:00 AM
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Several emotions and moments caught in one scene. Like Justice weighing fearlessness against afraid, you balance everything out leaving with the last line that can last the reader, at least me, to think, eventually the tide will rise, but when? Brilliant Maureen. Thank you.
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Michael Vacek
Date: 3/17/2018 9:54:00 AM
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Mo...I am in such awe of your simplicity and circular similes. Your poems are such that you can contemplate the top-down, bottom-up, middle and around. You most surely add a little lime to your castles, steadfastly building them in our thoughts.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/17/2018 10:05:00 AM
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A little lime zest Helps the poetry go down ;) thank you so much Michael! xomo
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Pat Adams
Date: 10/9/2017 10:51:00 PM
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Very well put MO, more afraid and fearless on the cusp building something that most probably will wash out with the tide! Amazing, you are truly an inspiring poet. (I promise I'm not a stalker) Just digging it!!...............xoxPat
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/3/2017 6:10:00 PM
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an eye on the tide, love it Maureen
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/4/2017 7:01:00 AM
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:D so glad you do! Ty xomo
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 3/7/2017 9:14:00 AM
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I absolutely love your wording with this poem. wonderful write, Maureen!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/7/2017 11:10:00 AM
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Thank you Jesse! ;) xomo
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Joseph May
Date: 2/13/2017 9:29:00 AM
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Very nicely penned...enjoyed..
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John Michaels
Date: 2/11/2017 6:53:00 AM
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Some lovely imagery there, but the subtext is quite sad. Thank you for sharing.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/11/2017 7:51:00 PM
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Thank you for receiving; t'was a tumultuous time, sadness definately was there too.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 2/7/2017 11:51:00 AM
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Hope it doesn't rain on your sand castle, they can be so fragile.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/7/2017 11:53:00 AM
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We are so fragile. N'est pas? Thank you Phil xomo

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