Afzal Nusker Poet Sedoka

Eden Garden

Her cheeks bloom coy red
                  while I kiss her with passion.
               No garden grows such blossoms.
                       Sweetest nectar drips
                   from her luscious lips, I lick.
My own Garden of Eden.

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Richard Lamoureux December 7, 2017 at 8:59 AM I love this passionate write! Afzal Nusker May 8, 2018 at 12:48 AM Thanks...

Pandita Sietesantos July 27, 2017 at 1:47 PM Beautifully sensuous! Your style cannot be duplicated - just like the Garden of Eden!! Best regards. Pandita Afzal Nusker July 28, 2017 at 10:34 AM Thanks a lot for such kind comments, Pandita.

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2017 at 5:34 PM oh dang. I really wanted to see what you wrote for this one!