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Eden Calling

A ferocious storm battering outside  
heavy winds howling a wolf
angry breaths pelting rain bullets hurl
whistling apple of these eyes
dreaming inside the howling moans
feeling your caress deeply touching  
away our souls in another world kissing
mist falling down weeping inside
dreaming always with you by my side 
 
A deep sigh of pain yearning loves voice
distant tears weeping from the heart and soul
floating with light into another world
blinded by everything one sees
queen off the rainbows mist 
through lashes bouquet colors
sensing many emotions deeply felt
crying happy crying sad crying glad 
dreaming always with you by my side
 
Liam McDaid and Gary Bateman Collaborative Poem, Free Verse, October 12, 2014

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Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/12/2014 9:37:00 PM Two great writers, works for me! Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 10/13/2014 3:57:00 PM Maurice, Liam is paying me a ransom to work with him + he promised me all the Irish Whiskey I could drink, which could be considerable under the circumstances!! Cheers, Gary Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/13/2014 4:16:00 AM thank you deeply touching beautiful comment truly appreciated maurice

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/12/2014 8:15:00 PM How cool you did this collab with Gary. he is such a great writer! You two rock!! What made you choose this theme? Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 10/13/2014 3:55:00 PM Andrea, Don't believe a word that Liam says. He has an Army of Leprechauns as friends. Cheers, Gary Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/13/2014 4:09:00 AM thank you andrea better polish my dancing shoes smiling a mad notion you know me well enough now andrea sure i have even written about being kidnapped with aliens you never know whats coming gary is excellent on this really blew the ship out to sail

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/12/2014 5:16:00 PM Dear Liam and Gary, Love causes us to feel so many things and when we are "in" love, it is easy to be "blinded by everything one sees." You write very well together. Why don't you try collaborating for the Halloween Co-writes contest! Awesome poem here. Love, carolyn Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 10/13/2014 4:01:00 PM Carolyn, Liam and I should talk about that. Sounds like a great idea. I know he's going to release one tomorrow that we worked on today: "A Halloween Story." Cheers, Gary Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/13/2014 4:03:00 AM hi carolyn love is an abundance of pure beauty blind is the face of untruth wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated god bless

Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/12/2014 3:21:00 PM A beautiful collaboration..So msny beautiful lines.I am going to.favour it.Well done to you both! Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 10/13/2014 4:03:00 PM Thanks Charma!! It is very good working with Liam on selected themes of mutual interest. Cheers, Gary Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/12/2014 4:52:00 PM i love how gary really blossomed this charmaine we have another one tomorrow lol you will be in suspense thank you kindly for the heartwarming dazzling comment deeply appreciated bless you pal

Therese Bacha Date: 10/12/2014 1:44:00 PM Hello t both of you, an amazing written poem about love. Very smooth, and so sincere. Well done. Terry Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 10/13/2014 4:04:00 PM Hi Terry . . . Thanks for your comment too!! I want to check out your poetry too in the future. Best Wishes, Gary Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/12/2014 4:48:00 PM hi terry thank you so very kindly wonderful comment dear friend yeah gary blends well with my style smiling

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/12/2014 1:38:00 PM - A truly amazing well written poem from both of you - Love in the autumn - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 10/13/2014 4:07:00 PM Anne-Lise, So you caught me collaborating with Liam??!! You know that we are both of Irish heritage. He's 100% of course and I'm 50%, but we share many of the same thematic views. I must check out your latest poems too!! Cheers, Gary Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/12/2014 4:44:00 PM anne lise you never know what it will be next ha ha me and gary has another on the way tomorrow thank you as always dear friend for your really beautiful comment truly beautiful comment

Jerry T Curtis Date: 10/12/2014 12:34:00 PM Liam, I can see Gary's influence--- a remarkable collaboration, you two should do more---and if you do---let me know---I don't want to miss them. Thanks Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 10/13/2014 4:10:00 PM Hello Jerry, I have forgotten you and Robert. Very busy too with a lot of writes lately. And, have been working off and on with Liam on certain key writes. Always great hearing from you, and I have to get over your way to check out your latest and greatest!! Cheers, Gary Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/12/2014 4:39:00 PM well jerry to please you we have another colab tomorrow its pouring out of us lol also poor old frog is really a picture for you to see pal we wrote it as well smiling thank you kindly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated