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Eddy In the Mirror

A long hard look softens to the touch life lines rivers that ebbed and flowed the midstream upstream fight has left its nicks and scars but the brooks that babbled batting lashes that sent splashes over laugh line rapids and pooled in floods of pain have all eventually come to swirl in the curled corners of an ultimately unerodible smile 11.26.2019 The Metaphor of your Face Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Lawless

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/8/2020 12:36:00 PM

Mo congratulations on your win!;)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/25/2019 5:58:00 PM

Merry Christmas Maureen. I can't wait to see what the new year brings. I hope it is kind to you. Hope to catch you writing more like this incredible Eddy-ble in the Soup. -Richard

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/26/2019 9:11:00 AM

Merry Christmas to you my friend! I am full of hope for the new year... Thank you, and you. I hope to catch my muse composing more like this myself ;), Warm hugs and well wishes, xomo

John Hamilton

Date: 12/20/2019 12:21:00 PM

This is stupendous writing Mo, glad Rick could see the greatness of this write. It is truly a metaphorical tidal wave, I have to fave this one to read over and over

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/21/2019 10:59:00 AM

Thank you so much John! I never know what my muse has in store for me piqued by a prompt. This one flowed. xomo

Running Wolves

Date: 12/5/2019 5:47:00 AM

Awesome write. Love the way you equate the changes of time to a river constantly changing its riverbed, not all changes a bad though.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/5/2019 7:51:00 AM

Thank you so much Robert! :), xomo

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/1/2019 10:48:00 AM

"but the brooks that babbled batting lashes that sent splashes over laugh line rapids", super imagery and metaphor here.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/2/2019 7:33:00 AM

Thank you! Tickled with my muse for that one ;), xomo!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/1/2019 5:49:00 AM

Very creative imagery, MM. Unerodible smile, eh ... only a poet could come up w/such a memorable phrase like that. Cool water penning, dear friend. Love and more love always.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/1/2019 8:10:00 AM

Thank you dear Freddie, hugs and sunshine, xomo!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/30/2019 7:33:00 AM

My vote for POTD. A great way to start the day. This one flooded my mind with thoughts. Bravo!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/30/2019 8:29:00 AM

I'm thrilled you like it so! Thank you! xomo :)))

Quoth Theraven

Date: 11/29/2019 5:49:00 PM

Maureen, Quite right and very, very, the tidal flows of your world's end. For bright the poem's self image and still your best friend. Good luck in the contest. -Richard

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/30/2019 8:28:00 AM

Poetry received, lovely! Thank you Richard, xomo

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/29/2019 11:18:00 AM

A very fine creation my friend. And certainly was a joy to read and understand that such is a brilliantly versed reflection upon a life lived. A fav, good luck in the contest.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/30/2019 8:23:00 AM

Thank you Robert, my most esteemed poetry friend <3 xomo!