Debbie Guzzi Poet Senryu

---Ecstasy Well Met

brilliant laughter
swell the heart of desire
red lipstick kisses

pretty pouting mouth
gateway to infinity
engulf the rising

altered twining souls
rest fed within the joining
ecstasy well met

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Poet Destroyer A December 7, 2012 at 3:46 PM I' see the greatness in your ways....pd

Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 10:51 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Debbie. Love, Carol

Dr Hitendra Mehta February 18, 2011 at 12:28 AM Many Congrats Debbie for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Elaine George February 17, 2011 at 11:50 PM Beautiful Senryu, Deb. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2011 at 8:59 PM VEry nice ones on Ecstasy, Deb. Congrats on your win. I hope you see the soupmail I sent you soon. Am anxious for your replies!

Kash Poet February 17, 2011 at 5:29 PM Beautiful Senryu!Congrats Debbie on your well deserved win---kashinath

Robert A. Dufresne February 17, 2011 at 4:54 PM Whew! gotta get more ice! Congratulations Debbie

Sharon Ruebel February 17, 2011 at 9:59 AM Hello Debbie, Congratulations on your win in the contest Just beautiful! As Always, Shar

Nette Onclaud February 16, 2011 at 9:06 PM ahah, twining souls.. love the way this senryu cascades!! CLAP CLAP for this whopper, lights! :) huggs, nette

Tahera Mannan February 16, 2011 at 8:12 PM A beautiful ecstasy. Many congrats for this win.

Robert Pettit February 16, 2011 at 7:39 PM Debbie, when I first read these senryu, I had the feeling they would win in Linda's contest. They certainly did. Congratulations!

Dr.Ram Mehta February 16, 2011 at 5:59 PM Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Linda, Debbie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 16, 2011 at 5:39 PM Congrats Debbie on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your constant support ...always...

Robert Pettit February 4, 2011 at 2:37 PM This is a nice trio of senryu that collectively convey great descriptiveness. I have written an animal limerick. Check out my submission "A Kangaroo named Joe".

James Marshall Goff February 3, 2011 at 3:24 PM HCHH!!!! PERFECT!!! jimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 3, 2011 at 6:38 AM thankxx for supporting my current contest Debbie .. good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer .. as always... appreciate ...

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2011 at 11:10 PM I think you did a great job and they seem like real senryu, Deb. LUv, Andrea

Skat A February 2, 2011 at 7:35 PM Nice Debbie, how are you? Stopping by to say hi and close my contest I hope. pretty hot by the way.. Luv*Skat

Dr.Ram Mehta February 2, 2011 at 3:43 PM Beautiful poetic expressions high humor ... gateway to infinity , deb.

Nette Onclaud February 2, 2011 at 8:40 AM debs!! you pumped my veins red with this amorous write!! you sensual you.. love it, sounds a bot like rumi!! winning wishes, lights!! :) huggs, nette