Ecstasy of Emotion

Here we are, the time is now,
Looking in your eyes flashes all the memories somehow.
Its just you and me alone in the crowd,
In our own world with no intruders allowed.

We should leave, walk away,
Coz my words have nothing more to say.
Holding your hand the time holds its motion,
Like a timeless orb flowing with an ecstasy of emotion.

It is getting harder to desert myself from you,
My broken and lifeless world consists of nothing new.
Yet I hope to give it all in your hand,
Fetch a diamond for you from my world of barren land.

I cannot walk away and leave you there,
But I don't belong with you or anywhere.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Phen Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 10:14 AM
thanks a lot sarah and kirby... your comments mean a lot for me....
Seraphin Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 5:29 AM
* “Beautiful * My Dear Precious Mark * Straight From The Heart * What More & Love Is All There Is * Dust * No * Pure Fine Gold * Luv Always * Sarah.” *
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November 4, 2011 at 8:41 PM
That was really a great write aside from the "coz." It really helps visualize the need for one another that is always present in a relationship...or love...or both!   -KMD
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