Ecstasy of An Echo

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if the echo of you,
            is the only melody that holds me




- then i am in absolute bliss,
       and i wish to stay

in an impressible kiss;
the tranquility that moves upon my skin
. . such peace within

    ~ embrace me now, 
               and leave me breathless somehow ~

                    because . .

if repetition is the only melody holding me
  - then i need to abide in that moment,
          again and again

     the tender sweet harmony, that is you
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~ because i always want to feel you ~
a little romantic scribble
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Michael Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 6:40 PM
Ha ha...This is good...well said...
Nicole Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 10:18 PM
Thank you Arturo. I shall always write about love, in this way. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
May Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 11:50 AM
Beautiful verse Brandy..
Nicole Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 2:57 PM
Thank you Joseph. You and your thoughts are appreciate. :) Brandy
Marc Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 6:53 AM
So sweet - I love it!
Nicole Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 6:06 PM
I appreciate your thoughts. Thank you P.M. Richter. :) Brandy
Evans Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 8:27 PM
Nice. Heartfelt and poetic.
Nicole Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 8:42 PM
Thank you Richard. This poem holds many emotions indeed. It is that ache to feel such closeness. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 4:44 AM
I really enjoyed your romantic scribbles, Brandy, your words embrace me. John
Nicole Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Thank you John. I appreciate you and your kindness. My words are always from the heart. ~ Brandy
Man Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 1:32 AM
Brandy.. Your romantic scribbles leave me spellbound. Your write is deep in its touch. It clings to my soul and hugs on my heart!
Nicole Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 9:27 AM
Awe, thank you Lyric Man. Romance is the echo of love, moments around the heart. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
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