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Ecstasy Beyond Dreams

Of Ecstasy Beyond Dreams Upon her lips so lush..so full did I place a kiss A kiss filled with all the passion, all the intent I possessed. Held her close,so very close Felt her heart beating.. the quivering in her breath.. her bosom rising and falling Wished with all within me for this moment never to end For I wish not to be the man I was afore A temple..a sanctuary..a lover.. a friend Unlike any other She be Come I to you as I am woman naked..vulnerable..imperfect part feral..part civil With a yearning,a longing that defies explanation.. Be one with me His luscious lips upon mine softly yet passionately tasting them As I tasted his kiss my knees went weak, my body shaking Holding me so close our bodies melted into one As were our hearts beating together I ached to feel his touch caressing my soul How I have waited for this moment To feel the warmth within his arms My essence cried out for him Hoping he was true There was a shakiness in his kiss as if he was uncertain Then slowly his kiss became more confident and I knew he would take me to heaven As we seemed to float above everything He was mine and I..was his
A collaboration by Brenda Chiri and Marius van Wyk

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 5/17/2020 8:59:00 AM
A beautiful sensual collaboration, Brenda!
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Date: 3/16/2020 8:39:00 PM
Very sensual, passionate; beautifully done.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/26/2020 9:09:00 PM
Thank you!;)
Date: 3/11/2020 11:16:00 PM
What a way to craft a sensuous verse.. For a while it took me to different world of Eros..... thanQ Brenda for the exquisite treat...
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/13/2020 6:07:00 PM
Thank you for the read! ;)
Date: 3/7/2020 9:13:00 PM
Brenda, This is one of the best collaborations I've been fortunate enough to read. Dauntless and passionate as Ravel's Bolero. Ole, Ole, Ole! -Richard
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/11/2020 12:45:00 PM
Wow thank you so much richard you are so very kind!;)
Date: 3/6/2020 2:17:00 PM
An excellent collaboration, Brenda & Marius...sensual and romantic...vintage poetry. ~ Regards // paul
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/11/2020 12:44:00 PM
Paul thank you so much for your visit! I appreciate it!;)
Date: 3/5/2020 8:33:00 AM
Wow! No, seriously, this is superb poetry; Brenda...I am genuinely impressed. If this is the result of a collab...then I for one say: "more please!" With warmest thoughts. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/11/2020 12:44:00 PM
John thank you so much! He is on facebook and a author of a few books! I love his posts on fb! Thank you ig was an honor to write with him!;)
Date: 3/4/2020 9:08:00 PM
Wow, Classic is this wonderful poetry, from you both. excellent read...
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/11/2020 12:43:00 PM
Harry thank you so much!;)

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