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Ecstasy

My first night with you felt like heaven to me It was everything and more that I dreamt it would be You took your time and made me feel Like I’d never felt before While holding you deep inside I silently cried out for more Our bodies were so hot that we nearly burst into flames Throbbing in sacred places Overwhelmed by pleasurable pain I took all that you gave me Down to the last drop My body trembled with passion As I begged you not to stop You caused me to do things that I’d never known As you kissed me in places that could never be told We were connected in mind, body and soul Hearts pounding so vividly that we both lost control I tasted you While you tasted me Memorized by your touch And a passion so sweet Intertwined by emotions Pure sensuality Until we both erupted In a surge of ecstasy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/23/2011 2:36:00 PM
speechless.
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Date: 8/14/2011 11:28:00 PM
This is great!!
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:28:00 PM
WOW, this is erotic very vey hot.....loved it...with love...old Jack
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Date: 8/1/2011 2:18:00 AM
A very nice description of two people enjoying our capacities to the limit. Very well done. Very sweet and sensual sharing with the world that everything is right about it. Way to go majestic lady, a very classy tribute to love. James
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Date: 7/21/2011 11:51:00 AM
chikwi, this poem is romantically flaming, but be careful and you must play safe. it hurts when we depart in the midst of our love.
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Date: 7/21/2011 5:15:00 AM
Hey, Chiquita! Play with fire; get burned. Your poem puts out heat.
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Date: 7/20/2011 10:58:00 PM
wow love the passion,,, how are you once again? ready to try my new contest I hope,,,lol... kidding.. but, if you do it will be an honor,, take care,..p.d.
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