Ecstasy

My first night with you felt like heaven to me
It was everything and more that I dreamt it would be
You took your time and made me feel 
Like I’d never felt before
While holding you deep inside 
I silently cried out for more
Our bodies were so hot
that we nearly burst into flames
Throbbing in sacred places
Overwhelmed by pleasurable pain 
I took all that you gave me
Down to the last drop
My body trembled with passion 
As I begged you not to stop
You caused me to do things that I’d never known
As you kissed me in places that could never be told
We were connected in mind, body and soul
Hearts pounding so vividly that we both lost control
I tasted you
While you tasted me
Memorized by your touch
And a passion so sweet
Intertwined by emotions
Pure  sensuality
Until we both erupted
In a surge of ecstasy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Francis Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 2:36 PM
speechless.
Ndugo Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 11:28 PM
This is great!!
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 6:28 PM
WOW, this is erotic very vey hot.....loved it...with love...old Jack
Gooch Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 2:18 AM
A very nice description of two people enjoying our capacities to the limit. Very well done. Very sweet and sensual sharing with the world that everything is right about it. Way to go majestic lady, a very classy tribute to love. James
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 11:51 AM
chikwi, this poem is romantically flaming, but be careful and you must play safe. it hurts when we depart in the midst of our love.
Smith Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 5:15 AM
Hey, Chiquita! Play with fire; get burned. Your poem puts out heat.
A   Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 10:58 PM
wow love the passion,,, how are you once again? ready to try my new contest I hope,,,lol... kidding.. but, if you do it will be an honor,, take care,..p.d.
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