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Eclipsing Love

When love is shown we act like we're all somewhat known With our loved ones listening to us pour out our hearts Trying to hide our love by eclipsing it like the moon behind something we'll pay less attention to Eclipsing love is like denying you ever have loved denial not being very optimistic it would counter as an alternative to being sick Sick to even knowing that you would dare to hide love that you dare to show it and that dare would end up in devastation

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/16/2010 1:40:00 PM
It reads like a fear of falling in love, and fearing the consequences >> James
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Date: 1/19/2010 11:05:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderfully written poetry today Brittany. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Love, Carol
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