Emile Pinet Poet Blank verse

Eclipse Reality

Devastated by lost love;
emotions morph into tears.
And fragmented fantasies;
fuel imagination.

Mourning innocence's demise;
you reevaluate trust.
And garner hope from wishes
left at the fringes of youth.
 
Passion's promises echo
deep within an empty heart.
Yet, the illusion of love
can't eclipse reality.

Drowning in a sea of tears;
love dies, and yet, hope survives.
And tethers yesterday's dreams,
to a better tomorrow.

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Line Gauthier March 6, 2018 at 8:37 PM Well done, Emile. This is the stanza I love most: "Mourning innocence’s demise you reevaluate trust. And take stock of spent wishes left at the fringes of youth." Emile Pinet March 7, 2018 at 9:11 AM Thanks Line. I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Paul Callus June 25, 2015 at 4:06 PM Hi Emile! This is a very good poem written in flowing free verse. Nothing wrong with crying over lost love, but then, once tears stop, it's time to move on! #7 // paul Emile Pinet June 25, 2015 at 4:45 PM Thanks Paul, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Matthew Anish June 24, 2015 at 11:39 PM Hope is very important as you say in this work and I like the picture you chose to go with it. Yes, my poem had a typo which you noticed and I corrected it. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Emile Pinet June 25, 2015 at 10:47 AM Thanks Matthew, I appreciate your support. Emile.