Eclipse

Pleiades... Evening skies polarized Early end to the light Eyes spy orb above crags Eager pinhole cam shows Essence, inverted page Eureka! Welding specs! Everyone have a look! 9/2/16

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Al Juman

Date: 7/3/2018 2:43:00 PM

very good my friend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2016 8:12:00 PM

The last line is so cute!! A very inventive one. Congrats on the winners' list.

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/26/2016 8:46:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 9/23/2016 5:32:00 AM

So wonderful! I enjoyed your POV taken for this eclipse, so different from my poem eclispe (not for any contest) Well composed. :)

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/26/2016 8:46:00 PM

Thanks, Sunita!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/23/2016 12:22:00 AM

This is great. Congratulations, Kai

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/26/2016 8:46:00 PM

Thank you, Kai!

Paul Callus

Date: 9/22/2016 3:05:00 PM

Eclipses are always a delight to watch, Tom; enjoyed your clever take on this Eclipse theme, Congrats on your fine win! Regards // paul

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/26/2016 8:47:00 PM

Thanks, Paul!

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/22/2016 1:35:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Tom :)

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/26/2016 8:48:00 PM

Thank you, Laura!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/22/2016 12:45:00 PM

- I think it's a nice thing to do, to congratulate all one by one - in the contest I participate in - As a little "thank you for the match" regards ..... - Some I have read before and others not - It will always take some time, a long list of winners - But for me it is common courtesy and a pleasure to congratulate you Tom - Should be higher on the winning list - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/26/2016 8:48:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise!

Lu Loo

Date: 9/22/2016 8:52:00 AM

Beautiful Tom I've always loved writing the word "eclipse" its just so elegant...congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/26/2016 8:47:00 PM

Thanks, Luloo!

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/21/2016 8:24:00 PM

Tom, you captured the excitement of an eclipse in your Pleiades. Congrats on your win! Blessings!

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/22/2016 5:54:00 AM

Thank you, Kim! Fun contests as always!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/16/2016 10:31:00 PM

I love your entry Tom! I chose elephant, but have not posted it yet. This is such a fun form. ; )

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/22/2016 5:54:00 AM

Thank you, Connie!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/16/2016 6:25:00 PM

very clever...in astronomy, physics, and poetry....

Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/27/2016 6:08:00 PM

You're very talented Tom, by the way are you a politician from Pennsylvania?

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/22/2016 5:55:00 AM

Thank you, Pashang!

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/9/2016 6:15:00 AM

E xcellent...e njoyed...e asy win Tom...the E's have it...god bless...^WW^

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/22/2016 5:55:00 AM

Thanks, WW!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/4/2016 11:50:00 PM

I have never tried this form, however this has inspired me to give it a shot, lovely poem!

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/5/2016 8:14:00 AM

Thank you, Arthur!

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/3/2016 5:39:00 AM

Beautiful sparks of imagery ...

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/5/2016 8:14:00 AM

Thank you, Probir!

John Hamilton

Date: 9/2/2016 8:23:00 PM

Great pleiades Tom, i love eclipses, I even love the word eclipse...mmm love it. This was a total eclipse of the mind. Great work if for contest hope it does well! Cheers

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/5/2016 8:15:00 AM

Thanks, John!

Tom Arnone

Date: 9/2/2016 7:35:00 PM

I think I need protective glasses! (Ha, ha). Are we up to Pleiades E already? ;-)

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/5/2016 8:15:00 AM

Not yet. I saw someone else's "E" pleiades and assumed we were.

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/2/2016 5:30:00 PM

This is great Tom. I think I see it!

Tom Quigley
Date: 9/5/2016 8:15:00 AM

Thanks, Daniel!