Eclipse

Pleiades...

Evening skies polarized
Early end to the light
Eyes spy orb above crags
Eager pinhole cam shows
Essence, inverted page
Eureka! Welding specs!
Everyone have a look!

9/2/16

naturesunverse

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Al Juman

July 3, 2018 at 2:43 PM

very good my friend

Andrea Dietrich

September 25, 2016 at 8:12 PM

The last line is so cute!! A very inventive one. Congrats on the winners' list.

Tom Quigley

September 26, 2016 at 8:46 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

Sunita U.D Palawon

September 23, 2016 at 5:32 AM

So wonderful! I enjoyed your POV taken for this eclipse, so different from my poem eclispe (not for any contest) Well composed. :)

Tom Quigley

September 26, 2016 at 8:46 PM

Thanks, Sunita!

Kai Michael Neumann

September 23, 2016 at 12:22 AM

This is great. Congratulations, Kai

Tom Quigley

September 26, 2016 at 8:46 PM

Thank you, Kai!

Paul Callus

September 22, 2016 at 3:05 PM

Eclipses are always a delight to watch, Tom; enjoyed your clever take on this Eclipse theme, Congrats on your fine win! Regards // paul

Tom Quigley

September 26, 2016 at 8:47 PM

Thanks, Paul!

Laura Leiser

September 22, 2016 at 1:35 PM

Congrats on your win, Tom :)

Tom Quigley

September 26, 2016 at 8:48 PM

Thank you, Laura!

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 22, 2016 at 12:45 PM

- I think it's a nice thing to do, to congratulate all one by one - in the contest I participate in - As a little "thank you for the match" regards ..... - Some I have read before and others not - It will always take some time, a long list of winners - But for me it is common courtesy and a pleasure to congratulate you Tom - Should be higher on the winning list - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Quigley

September 26, 2016 at 8:48 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise!

Beautiful Scars

September 22, 2016 at 8:52 AM

Beautiful Tom I've always loved writing the word "eclipse" its just so elegant...congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Tom Quigley

September 26, 2016 at 8:47 PM

Thanks, Luloo!

Kim Merryman

September 21, 2016 at 8:24 PM

Tom, you captured the excitement of an eclipse in your Pleiades. Congrats on your win! Blessings!

Tom Quigley

September 22, 2016 at 5:54 AM

Thank you, Kim! Fun contests as always!

Connie Marcum Wong

September 16, 2016 at 10:31 PM

I love your entry Tom! I chose elephant, but have not posted it yet. This is such a fun form. ; )

Tom Quigley

September 22, 2016 at 5:54 AM

Thank you, Connie!

Pashang Salehi

September 16, 2016 at 6:25 PM

very clever...in astronomy, physics, and poetry....

Pashang Salehi

September 27, 2016 at 6:08 PM

You're very talented Tom, by the way are you a politician from Pennsylvania?

Tom Quigley

September 22, 2016 at 5:55 AM

Thank you, Pashang!

Winged Warrior

September 9, 2016 at 6:15 AM

E xcellent...e njoyed...e asy win Tom...the E's have it...god bless...^WW^

Tom Quigley

September 22, 2016 at 5:55 AM

Thanks, WW!

Arthur Vaso

September 4, 2016 at 11:50 PM

I have never tried this form, however this has inspired me to give it a shot, lovely poem!

Tom Quigley

September 5, 2016 at 8:14 AM

Thank you, Arthur!

Probir Gupta

September 3, 2016 at 5:39 AM

Beautiful sparks of imagery ...

Tom Quigley

September 5, 2016 at 8:14 AM

Thank you, Probir!

John Hamilton

September 2, 2016 at 8:23 PM

Great pleiades Tom, i love eclipses, I even love the word eclipse...mmm love it. This was a total eclipse of the mind. Great work if for contest hope it does well! Cheers

Tom Quigley

September 5, 2016 at 8:15 AM

Thanks, John!