eclipse

black sunflower sun
	onyx upon opal orb ~
		curious cat
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Elliott Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 8:37 AM
Such a beauteous haiku, Linda. A classic one. God's loving blessings to you. :)
Fowler Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 8:58 AM
Many thanks Regina! :)
Rolland Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 5:26 AM
so delicate and subtle haiku, enjoyed yann
Fowler Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 8:24 AM
Thank you Yann, So glad you enjoyed this one. :)
Mo Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 12:01 PM
There was a lot of chatter about the event bringing about thousands of cicadas from I don't know the netherworld, or am I subscribed to a lot of paranoia?...Your haiku reminds us that it was all a natural phenomenon and should be treated as such, unless of course the cicadas come :) enjoyed
Fowler Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 8:23 AM
LOL. They are a noisy lot. I imagine you will hear them if you do not see them. "They" say there will be double broods this year. I believe they are more concerned with time clocks and soil tempo than moon cycles, but who knows? Thanks Marugu! :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 6:38 PM
Love this cute image
Fowler Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 6:55 PM
Thanks Andrea! ;) :)
Anaya Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 2:19 PM
"Onyx upon opal orb" that's awesome. Animals must respond in wonder true! Have a good one Linda Alice~
Fowler Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 6:54 PM
Hi my dear BFF. Loved your Devil's Comet poem. ;) Yes, I think the animals wonder what's going on but are okay with it. Thanks for stopping by Anaya! :)
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April 13, 2024 at 1:03 PM
All round a luminary, to literary landscapes Linda-Alice I reckon this to be, I'm having Quite the task, observing the petals, though And the cat..Its all a bit blurry by now.! Yet As a stoic friend, I feel I had to step up.' All blessings.!!
Fowler Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 9:56 AM
Smiling here Joe - I always appreciate your comments! Thank you. :)
Kitchin Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 12:23 PM
Linda, a great haiku.
Fowler Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 9:55 AM
Thanks Tania! :)
Daniel Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 4:23 AM
Wonderful imagery, Linda:)
Fowler Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 10:15 AM
Many thanks dear friend. hugs :)
Andresen Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 6:55 AM
- Nice one, Linda :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 7:01 AM
Hi dear Anne-Lise. It's a bit late for the recent eclipse but I still think about the wonder of it. Thank you for commenting on my haiku. Make it a great weekend in your world! hugs :)
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