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anticipating darkness of solar eclipse four minutes of night shadow will never disguise madness of men on the earth

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Date: 4/9/2024 11:02:00 AM
Hello Chetta, So nice to meet you. There were many people were anticipating to see the eclipse. Many people did and many did not see it. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene./
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/9/2024 3:43:00 PM
Oh! Well neither did i. it was not dark enough. You were lucky to at least see one. i have never seen one. Enjkoy your even ing my friend. /Darlene/
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Chetta Achara
Date: 4/9/2024 1:48:00 PM
Thank you. I did not get to see this one, but I did see the one in 2017.
Date: 4/9/2024 6:33:00 AM
This is good. Do madden become madder during an eclipse? Hidden by darkness.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 4/9/2024 1:47:00 PM
Thank you. So much attention was paid to the eclipse it was easy to forget the realities on earth.
Date: 4/9/2024 1:21:00 AM
Some a few seconds of darkness, for others 75 years of darkness.
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Date: 4/8/2024 4:40:00 PM
whoa--how profound and timely this poem is. I agree. Hard to hide the madness of men. Well said.
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Date: 4/8/2024 2:57:00 PM
so thoughtful poem, eclipses are special moments thanks poet
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