Eclipse

anticipating 
darkness of solar eclipse
four minutes of night
shadow will never disguise 
madness of men on the earth

naturetanka

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Line Gauthier

August 13, 2024 at 7:59 AM

intriguing ~

Chetta Achara

August 13, 2024 at 11:47 AM

Thank you.

Crystol Woods

July 13, 2024 at 5:43 AM

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Chetta Achara

July 13, 2024 at 11:27 AM

Thank you.

Darlene De Beaulieu

April 9, 2024 at 11:02 AM

Hello Chetta, So nice to meet you. There were many people were anticipating to see the eclipse. Many people did and many did not see it. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene./

Darlene De Beaulieu

April 9, 2024 at 3:43 PM

Oh! Well neither did i. it was not dark enough. You were lucky to at least see one. i have never seen one. Enjkoy your even ing my friend. /Darlene/

Chetta Achara

April 9, 2024 at 1:48 PM

Thank you. I did not get to see this one, but I did see the one in 2017.