Eclipse

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anticipating 
darkness of solar eclipse
four minutes of night
shadow will never disguise 
madness of men on the earth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 8/13/2024 7:59:00 AM
intriguing ~
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Chetta Achara
Date: 8/13/2024 11:47:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 7/13/2024 5:43:00 AM
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Chetta Achara
Date: 7/13/2024 11:27:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 4/9/2024 11:02:00 AM
Hello Chetta, So nice to meet you. There were many people were anticipating to see the eclipse. Many people did and many did not see it. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene./
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/9/2024 3:43:00 PM
Oh! Well neither did i. it was not dark enough. You were lucky to at least see one. i have never seen one. Enjkoy your even ing my friend. /Darlene/
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Chetta Achara
Date: 4/9/2024 1:48:00 PM
Thank you. I did not get to see this one, but I did see the one in 2017.
Date: 4/9/2024 6:33:00 AM
This is good. Do madden become madder during an eclipse? Hidden by darkness.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 4/9/2024 1:47:00 PM
Thank you. So much attention was paid to the eclipse it was easy to forget the realities on earth.
Date: 4/9/2024 1:21:00 AM
Some a few seconds of darkness, for others 75 years of darkness.
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Date: 4/8/2024 2:57:00 PM
so thoughtful poem, eclipses are special moments thanks poet
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