Ecila (For My Rhiannon)

I entered the hollow
he begged me to follow
I ran just as fast as I could.

But when I got there
there wasn't a hare
so curious & dumbfound I stood.

Which way did he go?
it seems I don't know
and should I go this
way or that?

And if I go that
I may be to fat
to fit through the 
tunnel so small.

And if I take this
the hare I may miss
and never will catch
him at all.

Oh my, all these choices
and what are those voices
I hear in the distance so loud?

I don't want to rush now
my face is all flush now
I feel a slight pain in
my head.

At last I awaken
I must be mistaken
I'm finally home in my bed...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 12/26/2014 11:44:00 PM
SHARON, Congratulations -- This is a great way to end and start the new year, having your poem featured on the soups front page. Hope your Christmas was a merry one! Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/21/2010 10:11:00 AM
Ecila --- I get it Ecila is Alice spelled backwards.....you my dear are a natural talent....
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Date: 10/20/2010 9:59:00 AM
Cute little dream story Sharon >> James :)
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Date: 10/19/2010 6:19:00 PM
Just a little fun way to play
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