Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

Echoing Emptiness

Let my sorrows scatter through the echoing emptiness

For the shadows chatter amongst my hearts heaviness

Let my palpitating pain retreat upon realms recuperative

Thus my love will be complete amidst landscapes lucrative.






March.26.2019
Writing Challenge 5
Four Lines
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Placed 2'nd...Thank you

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Constance La France March 29, 2019 at 11:05 AM Winged, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned piece and gosh that is a lovely image and the music is great too~

M. L. Kiser March 28, 2019 at 8:09 PM A really beautiful piece; good luck in the contest.

Ravi Sathasivam March 28, 2019 at 8:01 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. All the best.

Jennifer Proxenos March 28, 2019 at 12:36 AM Winged Warrior this poem truly deserved a win - the words in this poem are so captivating - poetry hugs, Jenny

Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2019 at 2:33 PM - A great poem for this writing challenge ... congratulations, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)