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Echoing Emptiness

Let my sorrows scatter through the echoing emptiness For the shadows chatter amongst my hearts heaviness Let my palpitating pain retreat upon realms recuperative Thus my love will be complete amidst landscapes lucrative. March.26.2019 Writing Challenge 5 Four Lines Sponsored by: Dear Heart Placed 2'nd...Thank you

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Date: 3/29/2019 11:05:00 AM
Winged, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned piece and gosh that is a lovely image and the music is great too~
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Date: 3/28/2019 8:09:00 PM
A really beautiful piece; good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/28/2019 8:01:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. All the best.
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Date: 3/28/2019 12:36:00 AM
Winged Warrior this poem truly deserved a win - the words in this poem are so captivating - poetry hugs, Jenny
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Date: 3/27/2019 2:33:00 PM
- A great poem for this writing challenge ... congratulations, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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