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Echoes of the Soul

An opelescent sky is casting such glow
Hourglass moments a sip of sweet wine
I watch my truth sieve,suddenly I know
Life is a grain of sand in a bucket of time

A speck of dust out shines my shooting star
Its dazzling spark soon fades to nothingness
An inner journey that echoes a soul's bazaar
Trading a wish for a gallant heart's  prowess

Memories ripple,as I unscroll,the illusion
Turning back the pages to a summer's joy
I recall the vibrant flower's sweet infusion
Everyday was a blessing for us to enjoy

Time is of the essence,love a full necessity
Let us sift mindfully, cause life is full of brevity







Collaboration by : Mystic Rose
                                Charmaine Chircop

Tnks so much Mystic Rose( Vienna)
for giving me the opportunity 
to participate in this sonnet (my first : )

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Richard Lamoureux

March 1, 2014 at 9:17 AM

For some reason this title attracted me back to it. I enjoyed reading it again.

Richard Lamoureux

January 31, 2014 at 9:22 AM

I enjoyed reading your first sonnet a second time.

Richard D Seal

October 19, 2013 at 8:06 PM

Hi Charmy, Now this is the kind of poetry I enjoy most, this is lovely, the feel of floating in the mist of time comes across perfectly. A wonderful write, congratulations to both of you. Take care, Richard

Mike Bayles

October 11, 2013 at 12:14 PM

This is a very creative and vivid poem. I love the second line. Congratulations on the efforts of your collaboration.

Michael Ainsley

October 11, 2013 at 1:48 AM

Like sunrise after after a stormy night this collaboration Is full of light and inspiration. It is well done. Thank You.

Ken Carroll

October 2, 2013 at 6:55 AM

Hi Charmaine, A lovely write and collaboration. Ken

Debbie Duncan

October 1, 2013 at 12:34 AM

This is awesome,,,, you both did awesome job ;} this should turn into a winner ;}

John Loving Iii

September 21, 2013 at 2:44 PM

Ok this was a good collaboration. very good both of you seemed very polished. Vee and i did a collab a long time ago when she was new to the soup. but i can, or i cannot really see who did what but it shows that you two are compatable. thank you for remembering April. Your special because of that.

Chris Boskovski

September 18, 2013 at 10:55 PM

Hello Charma, I've missed you. I love your beautiful words that melt off the page, and now that you and My darling Mystic have teamed together to write such epic, genius poetry what an honor to read. What powerful and lovely writing a great poem! Signed the blue poet! xoxoxo hugs and kisses all around! :)

Carrie Richards

September 18, 2013 at 5:03 PM

Oh the pair of you turned words into magic....two lovely ladies, wrote an exceptionally beautiful poetry! A lovely pairing! ........and ps.......such a beautiful picture is your new avatar!! You are gorgeous, Charmaine!

Jared Pickett

September 18, 2013 at 12:41 PM

For the first attempt this is fantastic. I missed your writing during my absence. Well done!!

Tobey Hill

September 18, 2013 at 10:54 AM

lovely work...love your new pic too......TAH

James Peranteau

September 17, 2013 at 7:09 PM

Wise these words dear poet ! I so enjoyed your mindful lead into the truths of life in truth ! Wonderful write my dear poetic friend....much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

September 17, 2013 at 5:43 PM

wow, for first time sonnet, this is AWESOME. I congratulate you both and I see this really taking a top place in the contest!!!

Richard Lamoureux

September 17, 2013 at 5:11 PM

A stunning piece! Amazing first one. Bravo!

Harry Horsman

September 17, 2013 at 10:03 AM

your last comment on my sonnet was you had never written one before, well you sure had a brilliant teacher in vie, and this for a first from you is so awesome....