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Echoes of Shared Heartbeat

Written: December 06, 2024 ___________________________ We were born into tribes cinctured by bonds and praxis welded by ambits and dictums an eyeless chasm. But scope a sounder view just under the shimmering surface and the outcome will be luculent our parallels often outshine our oddities. Our blood is crimson all of us slipshod weeps all of us longing for love all of us fail to face our fears. Our zeal fashion fetching flow our souls seek seraphic symbiosis we all itch for a warm welcome and achieve startling accolades. But, we build walls, and draw lines in the sand, we judge hinged on appearance, and ignore the outstretched hand. But if we may just foresee, beyond the color of our skin, and the language we spree, we may find kin. Because in the recesses of our souls within our deep cores all of us are noxious rhapsodic around finding fulfillment. So let's slip away, from the chains of tribalism, and gasp our kinships, with love and hope. For only then, can we for real unite, and transcend our differences, Into a world of light.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/9/2024 12:59:00 PM

SP, funny that I just left you a comment reply moments ago that reflects the sentiments you describe. You deliver a wonderful message about tribalism using elegant poetic terms that leave me in awe. I am making this a favorite. I hope you can write more like this, which appeals to me who has a bit less of a poetic edge (a polite way of saying I am not as smart as you and I know it!) lol smiles!!!

Ink Empress

Date: 12/9/2024 6:56:00 AM

Dear dr sotto, this is such a thoughtful poem woven in such an eloquent and soulfully moving manner! Yes we are all different and we sometimes are too reluctant to face or overcome fears and so many judge others and refuses to see beyond the surface of what flows above: i love the ending, how it reminds us that unity can transcend all and we can find light through it all! Brilliant poem! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always!

Valsa George

Date: 12/9/2024 1:45:00 AM

What a sweet and uplifting message for mankind. Despite all differences of caste and color, man is essentially made up of almost similar feelings and emotions. Each man craves for love and acceptance. He becomes happy on receiving accolades. The blood running through everyman is red in color. Only when we break down the walls we have consciously built around us, we will be able to relate with each other as brethren. "So let's slip away, from the chains of tribalism, and gasp our kinships, with love and hope." Thank you dear Lasaad for this edifying message. Beautiful poem.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/7/2024 7:24:00 AM

This is a lesson that should be embraced by all - which, unfortunately, it is not. What a wonderful world we would have if we all shared all that we have. Break down all barriers and help all who have particular needs.

Michael Tor

Date: 12/7/2024 1:18:00 AM

Such beautiful words Lasaad sending a message of unity coming together and overseeing ones color but seeing the good in others ending racism and persecution of others. Well written my friend, epic words used in conveying, and a great message for all to read and conform too. Thanks for sharing my friend...