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Echoes of My Love

I need you, my words echo in the distance, into an abyss of darkness- Your eyes sparkled and I spoke with my fingers. Your touch, it held me... my words you grasp. I need you, my words were deep seeded in reminiscence into a chasm of nullity. Your fever broke and I awoke with you by my side. Your lips, they held me... my verses you comprehend. Humanity resists with adherence, yet you show discern for my complicated mind- Your mouth without guile, your hands toil to eternity to provide our daily bread. You curl your grace around my spine, the heavens fall and tremble at my feet. I need not anticipation of tomorrow as my sorrow is bloodstained and I am reborn. Does this love even make sense? There are too many metaphors to disentangle- too many syllables to count. For the comfort of my skin against yours outweighs any fallacies we may encounter. Your Favourite Free Verse Poem From October 2017 or November 2017 Poetry Contest Julia Ward November 1, 2017

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Date: 1/6/2018 6:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Laura.
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Date: 1/9/2018 10:34:00 AM
thank you sweet Line :)-luloo
Date: 1/6/2018 4:36:00 PM
Congrats Laura on your top win with this lovely poem..your work is always among the best!
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Date: 1/9/2018 10:34:00 AM
many thanks dear Vijay, as always ;) -luloo
Date: 1/6/2018 1:16:00 PM
Wow luloo, you managed to elevate poetic words to exalted heights in this romantic gemstone that radiates your glowing light! Just beautiful and so deserving of your high placement! Congratulations! I loved this poem! : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/9/2018 10:33:00 AM
thank you sweet Connie, appreciate your kindness ;) -luloo
Date: 1/6/2018 8:42:00 AM
A very interesting write Laura, using word combinations in unique and fresh ways, loved it all, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 1/6/2018 10:30:00 AM
thank you so much for my awesome placement dear John! I am honored : )-luloo

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