Echoes of My Love

I need you, 
my words echo in the distance,
into an abyss of darkness-
Your eyes sparkled and I spoke with my fingers.
Your touch, it held me... 
                my words you grasp.

I need you, 
my words were deep seeded 
in reminiscence into a chasm of nullity.
Your fever broke and I awoke with you by my side.
Your lips, they held me...
                        my verses you comprehend. 

Humanity resists with adherence, 
yet you show discern for my complicated mind-
Your mouth without guile,
your hands toil to eternity to provide our daily bread. 
You curl your grace around my spine, 
the heavens fall and tremble at my feet.
I need not anticipation of tomorrow 
as my sorrow is bloodstained and 
       I am reborn. 

Does this love even make sense?
There are too many metaphors to disentangle-
too many syllables to count.

                 For the comfort of my skin against yours 
                 outweighs any fallacies we may encounter.



Your Favourite Free Verse Poem From October 2017 
or November 2017 Poetry Contest
Julia Ward

November 1, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 6:34 PM
Congrats on your win, Laura.
Scars Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 10:34 AM
thank you sweet Line :)-luloo
Pandit Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 4:36 PM
Congrats Laura on your top win with this lovely poem..your work is always among the best!
Scars Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 10:34 AM
many thanks dear Vijay, as always ;) -luloo
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:16 PM
Wow luloo, you managed to elevate poetic words to exalted heights in this romantic gemstone that radiates your glowing light! Just beautiful and so deserving of your high placement! Congratulations! I loved this poem! : ) xxoo
Scars Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 10:33 AM
thank you sweet Connie, appreciate your kindness ;) -luloo
Hamilton Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 8:42 AM
A very interesting write Laura, using word combinations in unique and fresh ways, loved it all, congrats on a fine win!
Scars Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 10:30 AM
thank you so much for my awesome placement dear John! I am honored : )-luloo
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