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ECHOES OF HER

"Echoes of Her" I miss her luscious lips, the way they’d part, Whispering love, then silencing my heart. Tantalizing kisses, like fire and wine, Left a burn on my soul — sweet and divine. The fragrance of her perfume haunts the air, Like ghosted memories tangled in despair. Each breath I take, it aches like a crime — A scent that holds me captive in time. Her shampoo’s scent still lives on my skin, Soft floral echoes of where we’ve been. It clings like hope I cannot shed, A trace of heaven where angels once tread. Her hugs — oh, those powerfully warm tides, A storm of passion where safety hides. Wrapped in her arms, I could forget the world, As love in spirals and sparks unfurled. But what I miss most, what tears me apart, Is the beat of her heart against my heart. A rhythm now silent, cruelly displaced, By an emptiness only her love can replace.

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Date: 6/10/2025 1:18:00 PM
oh, l so wanted this to be a happy ending. Your poem of love for the women ' a rhythm now silent, cruelly displaced' is the echoes of her, so beautifully written. Thank you for sharing your poem with us today. J.
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tom walsh
Date: 6/11/2025 12:04:00 PM
thank you for your kind comments....just crushing for me to have such a vivacious, intelligent, gifted woman who chooses not to be loved...far beyond my comprehension, but I am sure there is a back story from previous marriages and/or relationships which have caused her pain and suffering, so she choose total avoidance.

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