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Echoes of Eclipse Flame

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Written: July 17, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: X F Lacasse ****************** From the anvil of solar eclipse flame ~ Sunsmith struck with a mallet lit by light Blows hump the sky ablaze by molten might— a yellow nepenthe for summer's shame! Sapphire sea warbles hymns amid her name cy(press) woods rostrum by a hedge of white— shades turned long as time that denied the night ~ Below straw frame—time seems to be the same. She wafts the fruit till flesh begins to burst! unbuttoning the orchards one by one — her breath is spice, her (kiss) an early thirst ~ a blaze baptized in laughter, sweat, and sun Yet 'neath her crown, a melancholy hides— a knowing nod to how the sear subsides?

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Date: 7/18/2025 4:02:00 AM
A vivid and evocative tapestry of summer’s fire and fleeting moments. I love how your imagery blazes with light and shadow, capturing both the passion and melancholy of the season’s embrace. Beautifully crafted!
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Date: 7/17/2025 5:21:00 PM
Intriguing words in this fine Sonnet for the contest, my friend. I think it will place well. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 7/17/2025 5:13:00 PM
I enjoyed the imagery and flow of your poem. I admire your skill in creating such a beautiful sonnet. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Date: 7/17/2025 4:55:00 PM
great music and great images, my favorite sonnet of the day, thanks poet
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Date: 7/17/2025 12:21:00 PM
A fav! Your muse is truly on fire. Every line is so beautiful, that I cannot pick it apart.
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