Echoes of Brilliant Blue

Beneath an azure sky, we skimmed the surface of the lake,
   our young son on an inner tube, laughing behind the boat,
     hanging on for life as he bounced on the waves in its wake,
splashing in sun-lit sparkles! Those echoes of brilliant blue
stay with me still! Bright was the sound of glee when things were new!
    I close my eyes and see it now; tranquilly I float
by the anchored boat on gleaming blue. Bittersweet is my ache.

8/22/18 for Laura Loo's Rhyme Time 6 - Verses Of Metaphors Poetry Contest
Theme #2: Echoes of Brilliant Blue/ Rhyme Scheme: A B A C C B A

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Date: 9/12/2018 4:54:00 AM
I love those "echoes of brilliant blue"; thanks for a beautiful read.
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Date: 9/11/2018 7:04:00 AM
lovely imagery sweet Andrea! Great rhythm and rhyme too..really enjoyed your poem. Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement..-luloo
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Date: 9/9/2018 8:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Lovely.
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Date: 9/9/2018 3:36:00 PM
Beautiful Andrea. A great piece. Congratulations on your win :) x
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Date: 9/5/2018 3:00:00 PM
You handled every form perfectly well. When I grow up, I want to write like you. Smiles
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Date: 9/2/2018 10:09:00 PM
So lovely Andrea. Congratulations on your win! : )
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Date: 9/2/2018 9:51:00 AM
Very nicely penned Andrea.. Congrats on your win..
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Date: 8/26/2018 4:33:00 PM
Refreshing, cute, lovely, nostalgic, bittersweet … your verses are all these things … so full of imagery and life. Vibrant and vibrating! Kudos. ~ gw
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Date: 8/25/2018 4:29:00 PM
Nice work filled with nostalgic images. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/23/2018 11:34:00 AM
This brings back fond memories for me as well, Andrea, best of luck in the contest. John
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Date: 8/22/2018 9:30:00 PM
that brought some distant memories... smooth sensual read
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Date: 8/22/2018 8:49:00 PM
Cute, I can see your son being pulled behind the boat in the inner tube...
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