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at times the emptiness weighs heavy in my pool of wistful solitude sometimes it’s more than i can bear at times I listen to the silence and how its nothingness echoes in my head sometimes it’s more than i think i can bear at times i crave the longing of togetherness the gentleness of lips upon my own sometimes it’s all much more than i can bear AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on May 4, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 9TH Posted on May 3, 2022

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Date: 5/27/2022 4:10:00 PM
Sometimes the emptiness is more than we can bear... beautifully stated, Line. Warm wishes ~ John
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Date: 5/28/2022 6:32:00 AM
Thank you, John. Most appreciated ~
Date: 5/10/2022 5:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line.. This was so breathtaking and lovely! Accompanied by your amazing and soothing voice.. Many blessings..
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Date: 5/11/2022 6:36:00 AM
Thank you very much, Robertina ~ most appreciated.
Date: 5/9/2022 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win the contest...a moving and heartfelt lyric. :)Paulette
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/9/2022 1:27:00 PM
Thank you very much for your visit and comment, Claudette ~
Date: 5/8/2022 8:08:00 AM
You are not alone in your feelings. Beautiful beyond words!
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Date: 5/8/2022 8:23:00 AM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Barbara ~
Date: 5/7/2022 1:15:00 PM
The ache and longing feel real, as your poetic words so aptly express the loss, Line. Beautifully written and congrats on your win! :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2022 4:48:00 PM
Thank you, Laura ~ much appreciated
Date: 5/7/2022 12:27:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem, I particularly liked the audio you have a soothing relaxing voice. This is definitely a new favourite of mine.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2022 4:48:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joanna ~
Date: 5/7/2022 8:12:00 AM
Congrats on this creative work being on Brian's winners' list. Way to go. Sara
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2022 9:15:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sara.
Date: 5/3/2022 3:59:00 PM
Hello Lin, Lin, i feel the same way. Hugs.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2022 9:15:00 AM
Thanks for the honor, Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/4/2022 6:33:00 AM
Hello Lin, thank you. Lin I am making this my fav. Hugs.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/3/2022 6:15:00 PM
Hang in there, Darlene ~

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