Line Gauthier Poet Lyric

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Echoes Inside My Head

at times the emptiness weighs 
heavy in my pool of wistful solitude
sometimes it’s more than i can bear

at times I listen to the silence 
and how its nothingness echoes in my head
sometimes it’s more than i think i can bear

at times i crave the longing of togetherness
the gentleness of lips upon my own
sometimes it’s all much more than i can bear



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on May 4, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 9TH

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John Watt May 27, 2022 at 4:10 PM Sometimes the emptiness is more than we can bear... beautifully stated, Line. Warm wishes ~ John Line Gauthier May 28, 2022 at 6:32 AM Thank you, John. Most appreciated ~

Robertina B. May 10, 2022 at 5:22 PM Congratulations on your win, Line.. This was so breathtaking and lovely! Accompanied by your amazing and soothing voice.. Many blessings.. Line Gauthier May 11, 2022 at 6:36 AM Thank you very much, Robertina ~ most appreciated.

Paulette Calasibetta May 9, 2022 at 8:52 AM Congratulations on your win the contest...a moving and heartfelt lyric. :)Paulette Line Gauthier May 9, 2022 at 1:27 PM Thank you very much for your visit and comment, Claudette ~

Barbara Barry-Nishanian May 8, 2022 at 8:08 AM You are not alone in your feelings. Beautiful beyond words! Line Gauthier May 8, 2022 at 8:23 AM Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Barbara ~

Laura Leiser May 7, 2022 at 1:15 PM The ache and longing feel real, as your poetic words so aptly express the loss, Line. Beautifully written and congrats on your win! :) Line Gauthier May 7, 2022 at 4:48 PM Thank you, Laura ~ much appreciated

Jo Chamberlain May 7, 2022 at 12:27 PM I enjoyed your poem, I particularly liked the audio you have a soothing relaxing voice. This is definitely a new favourite of mine. Line Gauthier May 7, 2022 at 4:48 PM Thank you very much, Joanna ~

Sara Kendrick May 7, 2022 at 8:12 AM Congrats on this creative work being on Brian's winners' list. Way to go. Sara Line Gauthier May 7, 2022 at 9:15 AM Thank you very much, Sara.

Darlene De Beaulieu May 3, 2022 at 3:59 PM Hello Lin, Lin, i feel the same way. Hugs. Line Gauthier May 7, 2022 at 9:15 AM Thanks for the honor, Darlene. Darlene De Beaulieu May 4, 2022 at 6:33 AM Hello Lin, thank you. Lin I am making this my fav. Hugs. Line Gauthier May 3, 2022 at 6:15 PM Hang in there, Darlene ~