Echoes

The echoes ring out
As the voices shout
No fury –
Just pain
As they scream out
Your name…

Stay with me…
I beg of you!
You are half of me –
& I’m part of you…
We share a soul –
2 halves united
made us whole…

Without a half
all sanity’s gone
all alone…
You’re the only one
you understand
I do believe –
I’ll be totally lost 
if you leave…

Please stay!
don’t go –
I beg of you…
You’ll be cursing us both…!
Forever wondering,
forever lost…
one soul without the other –
always searching 
for one another…

The echoes ring out
As the voices shout
No fury –
Just pain
As they scream out
Your name…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 2, 2015 at 12:26 PM
Hi Nicole, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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July 2, 2015 at 12:02 PM
Nicole, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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July 2, 2015 at 11:18 AM
- Welcome to P- Soup, Nicole :) - Thank you for your first poem :) - I'll be glad to read more from you in the future :) - I wish you good luck with your poems and comments - // Anne-Lise :)
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July 2, 2015 at 7:30 AM
Nicole, your write is so sadly moving and so beautifully penned, a well done 7 rating and welcome to Poetry Soup
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