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Echoes

The echoes ring out As the voices shout No fury – Just pain As they scream out Your name… Stay with me… I beg of you! You are half of me – & I’m part of you… We share a soul – 2 halves united made us whole… Without a half all sanity’s gone all alone… You’re the only one you understand I do believe – I’ll be totally lost if you leave… Please stay! don’t go – I beg of you… You’ll be cursing us both…! Forever wondering, forever lost… one soul without the other – always searching for one another… The echoes ring out As the voices shout No fury – Just pain As they scream out Your name…

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Date: 7/2/2015 12:26:00 PM
Hi Nicole, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/2/2015 12:02:00 PM
Nicole, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/2/2015 11:18:00 AM
- Welcome to P- Soup, Nicole :) - Thank you for your first poem :) - I'll be glad to read more from you in the future :) - I wish you good luck with your poems and comments - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/2/2015 7:30:00 AM
Nicole, your write is so sadly moving and so beautifully penned, a well done 7 rating and welcome to Poetry Soup
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