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Echoes

I call out your name My voice carrying my heart Nothing but echoes... echoes.... echoes... Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/30/2014 9:47:00 AM

Creative and unique use of the Senryu..Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for the visits to my page..I have finished my sonnet "Click Clack" if you care to read the finished version..Sara

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/1/2014 5:44:00 AM

Thanks, Sara. I did go back to it and read the ending. Very powerful. I live in those countries where people die everyday. Where will it all end? The sprinkler metaphor was very deep. Very good write. Thanks for the visit.

Robert Nehls

Date: 7/30/2014 2:31:00 AM

very creative, Eileen. Sometimes echoes are a not so welcome reminder. Very well written and sad, my friend.... Robert.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/30/2014 2:40:00 AM

Life has joy and sorrow...How can we understand and appreciate joy, without tasting of the sorrow. Thank you for your kind words.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/29/2014 7:36:00 PM

so simple and so profound...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/30/2014 2:40:00 AM

Thanks, my dear! Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 7/29/2014 12:27:00 PM

Some people write letters in the sand, others send echoes....but there is always the hope that the message goes through! Very lovely senryu, Eileen. // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 2:56:00 PM

Thanks ever so much, Paul. Glad to have you visit. Some messages are just not meant to go through....I guess.

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/29/2014 11:59:00 AM

Scream louder. ;) Gripping Senryu!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 2:56:00 PM

Thanks, my dear!!! I'm getting hoarse, so...I think I better preserve my voice. Hugs!! Gripping...nice!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/29/2014 9:40:00 AM

When he yells back to you I hope the dual echos ring in harmony.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 2:58:00 PM

I think he has laryngitis! No duets, I'm afraid.

Painted Hunter

Date: 7/29/2014 9:38:00 AM

You clever...;) That's a sharp senryu

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 2:58:00 PM

HEE HEE! I'm blushing with praise!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/29/2014 8:50:00 AM

YOU are adorable too :) Light & Love

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 3:00:00 PM

AWWWWW...thanks, Debbie! Love the light and love!

J. R. Corbin

Date: 7/29/2014 8:36:00 AM

Short but powerful. Very nice. Jim

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 2:59:00 PM

Thanks, JR. I was thinking you'd go for the tried and true...Short and sweet! Powerful does the trick! Thanks.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/29/2014 4:48:00 AM

Perhaps harmonics will lead you to the face of the name! NICE ONE! JSL( &Jess) we rate 7

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 3:14:00 PM

Hey. .. Thanks for the visit and for the seven.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/29/2014 1:48:00 AM

Wow Eileen that's lovely n romantic my friend! Loved the echos.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 2:04:00 AM

Thanks, Dr Upma...Glad to have a lovely visit from you! Hugs!

Justin Bordner

Date: 7/29/2014 1:08:00 AM

Where do the echoes end, on whose heart will they be returned from. I actually did this today for a woman I know. Your poem has the echo of love Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/29/2014 1:15:00 AM

Justin...I was wondering where you were. I was just going to pass by and leave a note! Here you are. Glad to see you again. I hope that the woman responds to you, Justin. You are a lovely person...very deserving.