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Echoes

I call out your name
My voice carrying my heart
Nothing but echoes...
                              echoes....
                                           echoes...

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Sara Kendrick

July 30, 2014 at 9:47 AM

Creative and unique use of the Senryu..Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for the visits to my page..I have finished my sonnet "Click Clack" if you care to read the finished version..Sara

Eileen Manassian

August 1, 2014 at 5:44 AM

Thanks, Sara. I did go back to it and read the ending. Very powerful. I live in those countries where people die everyday. Where will it all end? The sprinkler metaphor was very deep. Very good write. Thanks for the visit.

Robert Nehls

July 30, 2014 at 2:31 AM

very creative, Eileen. Sometimes echoes are a not so welcome reminder. Very well written and sad, my friend.... Robert.

Eileen Manassian

July 30, 2014 at 2:40 AM

Life has joy and sorrow...How can we understand and appreciate joy, without tasting of the sorrow. Thank you for your kind words.

Ilene Bauer

July 29, 2014 at 7:36 PM

so simple and so profound...

Eileen Manassian

July 30, 2014 at 2:40 AM

Thanks, my dear! Hugs

Paul Callus

July 29, 2014 at 12:27 PM

Some people write letters in the sand, others send echoes....but there is always the hope that the message goes through! Very lovely senryu, Eileen. // paul

Eileen Manassian

July 29, 2014 at 2:56 PM

Thanks ever so much, Paul. Glad to have you visit. Some messages are just not meant to go through....I guess.

Poet Tacito

July 29, 2014 at 11:59 AM

Scream louder. ;) Gripping Senryu!

Eileen Manassian

July 29, 2014 at 2:56 PM

Thanks, my dear!!! I'm getting hoarse, so...I think I better preserve my voice. Hugs!! Gripping...nice!

Richard Lamoureux

July 29, 2014 at 9:40 AM

When he yells back to you I hope the dual echos ring in harmony.

Eileen Manassian

July 29, 2014 at 2:58 PM

I think he has laryngitis! No duets, I'm afraid.

Painted Hunter

July 29, 2014 at 9:38 AM

You clever...;) That's a sharp senryu

Eileen Manassian

July 29, 2014 at 2:58 PM

HEE HEE! I'm blushing with praise!

Debbie Guzzi

July 29, 2014 at 8:50 AM

YOU are adorable too :) Light & Love

Eileen Manassian

July 29, 2014 at 3:00 PM

AWWWWW...thanks, Debbie! Love the light and love!

J. R. Corbin

July 29, 2014 at 8:36 AM

Short but powerful. Very nice. Jim

Eileen Manassian

July 29, 2014 at 2:59 PM

Thanks, JR. I was thinking you'd go for the tried and true...Short and sweet! Powerful does the trick! Thanks.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

July 29, 2014 at 4:48 AM

Perhaps harmonics will lead you to the face of the name! NICE ONE! JSL( &Jess) we rate 7

Eileen Manassian

July 29, 2014 at 3:14 PM

Hey. .. Thanks for the visit and for the seven.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 29, 2014 at 1:48 AM

Wow Eileen that's lovely n romantic my friend! Loved the echos.

Eileen Manassian

July 29, 2014 at 2:04 AM

Thanks, Dr Upma...Glad to have a lovely visit from you! Hugs!

Justin Bordner

July 29, 2014 at 1:08 AM

Where do the echoes end, on whose heart will they be returned from. I actually did this today for a woman I know. Your poem has the echo of love Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

July 29, 2014 at 1:15 AM

Justin...I was wondering where you were. I was just going to pass by and leave a note! Here you are. Glad to see you again. I hope that the woman responds to you, Justin. You are a lovely person...very deserving.

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