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Echoes...

A night heron rises unto the dark sky Wild geraniums overwhelm my senses Rush fire into and through my veins... Heart beats are set aflutter By the toe beats of your clogs As your clogs echo over The pavements in dark recesses of my memories

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Date: 5/12/2009 3:21:00 AM
I really like the image you create here
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Date: 5/5/2009 8:22:00 AM
welcome and stay in love with love! Light & Love
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Date: 5/4/2009 8:32:00 AM
a great poem well written, I used to have to wear clogs when they were in style in UK once, welcome to poetry soup God bless you from diane
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Date: 5/2/2009 7:53:00 AM
Great write Dr. , truly brings about the imagery. Welcome to the sopu! - darkpoet
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Date: 5/1/2009 2:45:00 PM
How amazing that even the sounds of her "clogs" evoke her memory, Sarthak. Excellent use of imagery! Carolyn
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Date: 5/1/2009 12:53:00 PM
Doc... are the geraniums a metaphor for the Lady's perfume remembered? great poem!! Jim
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