Echoes...

A night heron rises unto the dark sky
Wild geraniums overwhelm my senses
Rush fire into and through my veins...

Heart beats are set aflutter
By the toe beats of your clogs
As your clogs echo over
The pavements in dark recesses of my memories
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Stacey Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 3:21 AM
I really like the image you create here
Guzzi Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 8:22 AM
welcome and stay in love with love! Light & Love
Christian Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 8:32 AM
a great poem well written, I used to have to wear clogs when they were in style in UK once, welcome to poetry soup God bless you from diane
Orozco Avatar
May 2, 2009 at 7:53 AM
Great write Dr. , truly brings about the imagery. Welcome to the sopu! - darkpoet
Devonshire Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 2:45 PM
How amazing that even the sounds of her "clogs" evoke her memory, Sarthak. Excellent use of imagery! Carolyn
Goff Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 12:53 PM
Doc... are the geraniums a metaphor for the Lady's perfume remembered? great poem!! Jim
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