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Echoes

The echo of the echo In the minds of you and I, It tells our lips to tell it, It flies to make us fly. The glory of the glory That enrings our eyes like spring, It lifts us in its vision To wing and dance and sing. The echo of the echo Then replays again, remains, Reverberating verbals That rain and kiss and reign. The glory of the glory That is me and you, and we, It soars in every story That leaps into "agree"! It dances up the hollows Of our lungs and mouths and arms Till world in world is whirled And charms are meeting charms. It touches lips with brushes, Becomes a firmer sum; Our inner lust of winning Is one and whole and won. The echo of the echo, Oh, it will not die or go, But ever be an echo To show, and tell, and show.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/19/2009 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations Brian on your lyric "Echoes" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/16/2009 5:45:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful! "It dances up the hollows" I love this line. "Till world in world is whirled" WOW great writing! Congratulations on being featured. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/16/2009 5:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/16/2009 9:45:00 AM
Wonderful poem! Love the repetition and the rhyme. Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy~
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Date: 3/15/2009 1:53:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme to convey your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 3/15/2009 12:36:00 PM
This beautiful write is very spiritual for me, Brian and speaks so much to the Oneness!! Thank you so much for this wonderful write and it is certainly a very wise selection to be a feature this week here at the Soup!! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/19/2008 6:25:00 PM
Nice poem and nice flow of words...Raul
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