Echoes

The echo of the echo
In the minds of you and I,
It tells our lips to tell it,
It flies to make us fly.

The glory of the glory
That enrings our eyes like spring,
It lifts us in its vision
To wing and dance and sing.

The echo of the echo
Then replays again, remains,
Reverberating verbals
That rain and kiss and reign.

The glory of the glory
That is me and you, and we,
It soars in every story
That leaps into "agree"!

It dances up the hollows
Of our lungs and mouths and arms
Till world in world is whirled
And charms are meeting charms.

It touches lips with brushes,
Becomes a firmer sum;
Our inner lust of winning
Is one and whole and won.

The echo of the echo,
Oh, it will not die or go,
But ever be an echo
To show, and tell, and show.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 3/19/2009 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations Brian on your lyric "Echoes" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/16/2009 5:45:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful! "It dances up the hollows" I love this line. "Till world in world is whirled" WOW great writing! Congratulations on being featured. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/16/2009 5:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/16/2009 9:45:00 AM
Wonderful poem! Love the repetition and the rhyme. Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy~
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Date: 3/15/2009 1:53:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme to convey your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 3/15/2009 12:36:00 PM
This beautiful write is very spiritual for me, Brian and speaks so much to the Oneness!! Thank you so much for this wonderful write and it is certainly a very wise selection to be a feature this week here at the Soup!! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/19/2008 6:25:00 PM
Nice poem and nice flow of words...Raul
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