Get Your Premium Membership

ECHO MAN MY NAME

I am a time traveler, I travel incognito, I am immortal, Have traveled worldwide, From the beginning of time, So this is no nursery rhyme! I see your planets devastation, My message, Hope, peace and unity. My home is a far away galaxy Far out in space, I am saddened looking down, At your wanton destruction Of the human race. In my galaxy, we live in harmony, There are no wars. This is is my last visit, So humans take serious note, My successor unknown, He or she could predict doom There is no longer room, To be complacent and passive. Beware of the likes of Elon Musk, Planet earth, gather your wits, For now, and from herein, More conspiracies and cyber tricks, Will abound. Wealth must be equally Distributed, an absolute must Power will become far more just, Perhaps an illusion, But a worthwhile Goal and solution. Let my words echo far and wide, From one side of the planet To the other side. Let all have equal access To health and medicine, No discrimination against Color, religion or social status, Step back a few paces, Look at your pollution, You need to adopt firm resolution, A beautiful, pristine planet earth. Is littered with refuse, Thrown from car windows You have become a dumping site, There is no escape, To where would you take flight. Neglecting your planet, Affects climate and brings About hazardous weather change, You have but little time left, You are destroying marine life, Temperatures so high, Seas are at boiling point, Is it not time therefore, for Humanity to address this issue, Stop being so greedy, strive For enough only, Then your life Globally, will change For the better, but please Understand, and hurry, for the first step. Begins with you. I pray my echo has been, Heard loud and clear, Start repairing your planet Today, but I mean today, And you will have nothing To fear. I now bid you farewell, Change is the key, I can see you are sad, But must also tell, For humanity one day to live well, Please persevere, So that history may retell. Poetry competition Entry: Starman Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tom Woody Dated; 2024/11/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/20/2024 10:31:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem of inspiration! Today's world in all its stark nakedness is presented before us. Unless we take enough precautions, we are likely to meet with our doom. So start from today itself. This grave warning from the Echo man cannot be disregarded. You have a broader view of life and the right perception about equity and justice. Dear Jen, I really enjoyed your rhyming poem. All the best in the contest. Love and Hugs, dear friend.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/19/2024 5:48:00 PM
such a radiant melody of renewal, Jen...happy to see you around after my long break from soup! well done!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/19/2024 9:32:00 AM
Do you notice that all the problem people in the world are pensioners? Old codgers should never be allowed near red buttons. From Putin to Trump. North Korea, Iran, Israel. These people are holding the world to ransom.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2024 11:37:00 PM
Trump will be giving his trilionaire buddy a position of great significance. Musk funded Trump to the hilt with elections and although not a criminal, knows the inside of a court room well! He is greedy and only wants power. I definitely agree with you, Bill Gates is a bad stick! These people probably make a billion a day just though bank interest. Imagine how they could change the world if a miracle happened and they donated this money for the betterment of humankind. Hugs, Jen .
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2024 10:09:00 PM
Good writing, Jennifer. I notice lots of people mentioning Musk a lot. With all the other millionaires out there, I wonder why his name gets thrown out more than someone like Bill Gates. For me, that guy is evil.
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/18/2024 11:39:00 PM
Sorry my friend, put this as a comment instead of a reply. oxox
Date: 11/17/2024 4:34:00 PM
Dear Jennifer, Such a powerful call for awareness and change! I love how you blend cosmic themes with urgent social commentary, urging humanity to reflect on its actions. I loved how your imagery of a time traveler witnessing our planet's struggles is striking and thought-provoking. What an impactful piece; it inspires hope for a better future! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Login to Reply
Date: 11/17/2024 3:35:00 PM
Jennifer, you aren't pulling any punches with this one. There is certainly enough wealth in this world for all to live in peace. It's hard to understand why so many don't see it that way. We would be a lot better off if the gap between the richest and poorest denizens of earth was just an order of magnitude or two. Not seven or eight. For non mathematicians that's the difference between 10 or 100 times as much wealth for the rich as compared to ordinary folks...versus a small number of people having a million or 10 million times more money than most of us do.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/17/2024 11:08:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. "Good Luck"  Have a blessed day writing away.................
Login to Reply
Date: 11/17/2024 7:48:00 AM
Mankind in all his stupidity will eventually destroy our beautiful world. Enjoyed your verse Jennifer, good luck in the contest. Tom
Login to Reply
Date: 11/17/2024 7:15:00 AM
This world must change. Otherwise, it is doomed to destruction.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/17/2024 6:42:00 AM
- Changes are the key ... I agree ... skillful (and important) poem, Jenny :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a nice Sunday :) - hugs
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry