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Echo and Narcissus Part 1

King Cephissus lured Liriope . To bathe and frolic in his stream Entrapping her she lost all hope His favours now she must redeem Her ardent struggles came to naught He ravished her, lust was the thief. Then left her weeping, so distraught. Exhaustion overcame her grief. Earth's circled fifteen times the sun, Since Liriope had given birth. Narcissus was her only son, His beauty unsurpassed on earth. Tiresias an ancient sage, To Liriope did prophesy. Would her son ever reach old age. The old blind seer gave this reply. "If he but fail to recognize His perfect image in his mind He may grow old and very wise" This puzzle now, will be defined Oh Echo why, did she beguile. Queen Hera with loquacity. Thou mountain nymph whose winsome smile Did mask Zeus from complicity With sylvan nymphs, his sole desire. Those dalliances once revealed. Set jealous Hera's heart on fire. Echo was blamed, her fate now sealed To never speak, till others spoke. And only then, those last words said. Then bite her tongue, or she would choke. This punishment's inside her head. A woodland hiding place she found In solitude and loneliness. One day she heard a youthful sound. His voice her lips, it did caress. Then "do not hide" Echo replied. This paragon of many charms, Bemused he said"please do not hide" When Echo ran towards his arms, Narcissus cast her to the ground, Extolling death, to her embrace As from her lips, his words resound She disappeared without a trace. To wander evermore alone Those mountain caves were her domain. Soon blessed death, turned bones to stone. Her voice was all that did remain. Narcissus so consumed with pride, No other love, except his own. His vanity, he cannot hide For beauty must be his alone. One love he spurned, chose suicide. Avenger Nemesis fortold, He would find love; then be denied Of beauty he would never hold. One fateful day beside a brook, Its fountain's crystal waters cool. An idyll scene, a shady nook. Trees overhang a silver pool. Narcissus stooped to quench his thirst. Reflections of a young man's face Below the surface was immersed. An image he tried to embrace. Those tranquil waters of the pool, Now sullied by a zealous kiss. Would not reveal to natures fool. This perfect trap by Nemesis. .

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Date: 8/26/2015 8:34:00 PM
Cool !! Love Greek Mythology. I wrote separate poems on these two characters... think they are posted on the soup somewhere.. nice write George #7
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Date: 8/28/2015 6:14:00 PM
Welcome to my site Kim, thankyou for reading my poem. I have now posted the second and final part, that you are invited to read. I appreciate your kind remarks. This is not for any contest, i thought that i would write something where i could put my own stamp on it. I do hope that you enjoy the rest or the poem. My kindest regards to you. George.

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