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Love's Echo | Elin Manahan Thomas Song of Songs Love's Echo … | Flickr

echo, love ... au contraire ... when I wanted to see you I closed my eyes when I longed for your whisper I screamed at the moon when I craved your taste I starved myself like a madman and shed my skin when I could not touch you. I have searched your blossoms to find only thorns I have traded ten angels for a demon, reborn I once walked among giants in your tiniest shoes and plucked your strings - your heart's aching strings with naught ... but blues. your walls ... I climbed them, formidable only to leap, lost, to your darkened depths I swam your passion but was dashed to ruin on your reef of apathy ago, I coursed your very dreams with wild wonder only to wake ... a nightmare ... unanswered questions blooming like tombstones dappling meadows ... in war. love, echo. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Completely Your Choice (27) Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 5/21/2021 5:51:00 PM
Another superb poem that encourages contemplation. Congratulations on your placement Greg. I hope you are well? Blessings xxoo
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Date: 10/20/2020 8:20:00 AM
Stunning emotional and somber. It took me deep into the state of its words with your talent and muse! Congrats!
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Date: 10/17/2020 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations Gregory on your winning placement. This poem is a brooding place of the heart and the pensive soul. It truly comes from a place of transparency and vulnerability. Hope all is well with your family. Sending prayers and blessings.
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Date: 10/17/2020 6:22:00 AM
A very moving poem Greg, rather haunting. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/10/2020 5:55:00 PM
brilliant, Greg . FAVE
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Date: 9/9/2020 4:50:00 AM
I shall have to revisit this one after i let it settle in the shadows of my mind. An intriguing write Gregory
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