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Echo

echo, love ...

au contraire ...
when I wanted to see you
I closed my eyes
when I longed for your whisper
I screamed at the moon
when I craved your taste
I starved myself like a madman
and shed my skin
when I could not touch you.

I have searched your blossoms
to find only thorns
I have traded ten angels
for a demon, reborn
I once walked among giants
in your tiniest shoes
and plucked your strings -
your heart's aching strings
with naught ... but blues.

your walls ...
I climbed them, formidable
only to leap, lost, to your darkened depths
I swam your passion
but was dashed to ruin on your reef of apathy
ago, I coursed your very dreams with wild wonder
only to wake ... a nightmare ...
unanswered questions blooming like tombstones
dappling meadows ... in war.

love, echo.






~ 1st Place ~  in the "Completely Your Choice (27) Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.
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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 5:51 PM
Another superb poem that encourages contemplation. Congratulations on your placement Greg. I hope you are well? Blessings xxoo
Blodgett Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 8:20 AM
Stunning emotional and somber. It took me deep into the state of its words with your talent and muse! Congrats!
Kauffman Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 9:54 AM
Congratulations Gregory on your winning placement. This poem is a brooding place of the heart and the pensive soul. It truly comes from a place of transparency and vulnerability. Hope all is well with your family. Sending prayers and blessings.
Fowler Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 6:22 AM
A very moving poem Greg, rather haunting. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 5:55 PM
brilliant, Greg . FAVE
Lawless Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 4:50 AM
I shall have to revisit this one after i let it settle in the shadows of my mind. An intriguing write Gregory
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