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Eb's Flo

In a passion of fashion, at the height's of female pulchritude; try as she might, Wobbling to walk on five inch stilletos; All she got were awkward gawks from the fellows. So not a cat but board walk by the sea, In a trashcan, she cast away, those shoes from her feet. Immediately relieved in the sand standing bare; Eyes closed, to smell and hear, seeming more aware. As designed her designer dress, to her feet fell flimsy. Her undone coif flowed with floating thoughts Botticelli. She slowly approached the ocean's sound, waves rushing meaningless; Yet covering enough of her legs; then waist, giving rebirth to Venus.

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Date: 3/10/2021 6:38:00 PM
nice one.. yeah, stilettoes are lethal but apparently the wedges are what cause the most ankle twisters lol sand between toes is the best.. the softest sands I ever walked were on a beach on the east coast of Florida and by Pyramid Lake in the Nevada desert - soft as talc but the toes got scorched on the Santa Cruz beach one summer! :)
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