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dark lightning darts through zigzagging into the house ~ white yarn ball’s moving
7th April 2022 For Robert James Liguori's "Black Cat Haiku" contest

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Date: 4/13/2022 10:22:00 AM
What a fun Haiku cat write. I can see this going on. Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Date: 4/8/2022 9:28:00 AM
This is a beautiful haiku ! I see before me a playful black kitten... ! I feel this should have been in the winners list as Andrea has expressed.
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Date: 4/8/2022 7:43:00 AM
Outstanding, my dearest, Jo! Blessings!
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Date: 4/8/2022 1:43:00 AM
Great imagery in this poem. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/7/2022 11:36:00 PM
I really like yours. It reminds me of one i did about a gliding cherry (carried by a bird) gliding cherry was in the last line of the haiku. I don't see congrats on this one, but for me, it's a winner.
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Date: 4/7/2022 10:10:00 AM
Nice!
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Date: 4/7/2022 9:48:00 AM
Yep, you have to love them. And stay out of their way, when they are on the move. Excellent imagery!
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Date: 4/7/2022 7:48:00 AM
'Tis a very creative take on the "Black Cat Haiku" contest, Jo. Now you tempt me to have a go at it, too :) Blessings // paul
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