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Ebony Plays Hide and Seek



dark lightning darts through
zigzagging into the house ~
white yarn ball’s moving





7th April 2022

For Robert James Liguori's "Black Cat Haiku" contest

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Paula Goldsmith

April 13, 2022 at 10:22 AM

What a fun Haiku cat write. I can see this going on. Have a blessed day writing away...................

Valsa George

April 8, 2022 at 9:28 AM

This is a beautiful haiku ! I see before me a playful black kitten... ! I feel this should have been in the winners list as Andrea has expressed.

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 8, 2022 at 7:43 AM

Outstanding, my dearest, Jo! Blessings!

Victor Buhagiar

April 8, 2022 at 1:43 AM

Great imagery in this poem. Best for a win.

Andrea Dietrich

April 7, 2022 at 11:36 PM

I really like yours. It reminds me of one i did about a gliding cherry (carried by a bird) gliding cherry was in the last line of the haiku. I don't see congrats on this one, but for me, it's a winner.