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Ebenezeer Scrooge

Ebenezeer Scrooge
Suspected subterfuge,
And his transformation seems extreme
For what was probably just a nightmarish dream!

For Andrea’s Christmas Clerihew contest

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Poet Destroyer A

December 26, 2014 at 10:53 PM

It's me again Jack, Congratulations on your "Christmas Character Clerihew" :) LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

December 25, 2014 at 11:04 PM

Jack, Stopping by to say hi, and wish you the best... Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~

Joe Maverick

December 21, 2014 at 11:08 AM

Mr Scrooge eh..' well I see you have given him the benefit of doubt in this one Jack 'watch out though' you may start another story.. Oh & congrats on the winning..'

Eve Roper

December 20, 2014 at 9:42 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jack Blessings and Merry Christmas

Olusegun Arowolo

December 20, 2014 at 1:57 PM

Congrats on your lovely win in this contest...

Barbara Gorelick

December 20, 2014 at 8:49 AM

Great rhyming..congrats to you. BG

Brenda Meier-Hans

December 20, 2014 at 8:01 AM

Probably true. :-). Congratulations on your win Jack.

Jan Allison

December 20, 2014 at 4:21 AM

Very clever jack - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 20, 2014 at 4:13 AM

Very clever write with good humor, congratulations on the win, Jack

Andrea Dietrich

December 20, 2014 at 12:56 AM

Oh, I'm glad to see you entered this one, Jack. it is very smart writing!! Big congrats in the contest. Yeah, he changed SO much in that story and yet it HAD to be just a dream.... right???

Robert Johnson

December 16, 2014 at 11:14 AM

It was enough to change his way. His eyes were opened on Christmas day. A conscience of grumbling created a heart. With a smile on his face, a new life, he did start. Merry Christmas jack. Peace. :)

Phyllis Babcock

December 15, 2014 at 11:16 AM

Good luck in Andrea's contest. Have not had much time to look at contests but I hope this new year will bring more reading and writing time. love phyl

Paul Callus

December 14, 2014 at 3:49 PM

Well done, Jack! It's what I call clever humour. Looking forward to see this one on the winners' list. Hope you're enjoying the festive season, even though it's still in its early days. // paul

Paul Callus

December 20, 2014 at 7:09 AM

...back with congratulations, Jack...very merited podium finish. May I wish you a merry Christmas and al the best for 2015. Cheers // paul